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felix stone (1967) and 2001

felix stone (1967) and 2001 Q5qqx
Overall, there was a lot of changing in that year, some building had been rebuilt or replaced. Some facilities had added to this area In 1967, the north of the main road an felix stone is displayed, the first one shows what the town looked before the development of the tourism, from East to West, however, this was transformed into a commercial complex, which involve a hotel, swimming pool as well as two tennis court. In addition, the marina, pier and fish market in the south east of felix stone was demolished in 2001 for the establishment of a public and private
Overall
, there was
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a lot of
changing in that year,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
building had been rebuilt or replaced.
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Some
facilities had
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
added
to this
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area


In 1967, the north of the main road
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an
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felix
stone
is displayed
, the
first
one
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shows
what the town looked
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before
the development of the tourism, from East to West,
however
, this
was transformed
into a commercial complex, which involve a hotel, swimming pool
as well
as two tennis court.
In addition
, the marina, pier and fish market in the
This expression is normally spelled as one or with hyphen.
south east
of
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felix
stone
was demolished
in 2001 for the establishment of a public and
Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraph
private

IELTS essay felix stone (1967) and 2001

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
101 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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