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IV. Write a passage about how to prepare for a natural disasters ( about 100 words)

IV. Write a passage about how to prepare for a natural disasters ( about 100 words) wBM7d
Disaster refers to the mishap, calamity or the grave occurrence from the natural or man-made reasons which can’t be stopped or tackled immediately by the affected community. Earthquakes, cyclones, droughts, floods, etc. Are some of the natural disasters resulting in huge loss of lives and properties. The direct or indirect impacts of disasters, either natural or man-made are colossal damage, destruction and death. The disaster management is the discipline by which human beings continuously make efforts to reduce the harm caused by the disasters. India has set up many departments and organizations for the same such as national disaster management authority (NDMA). But we are yet to achieve satisfactory progress with regard to timely management of disasters. This can be done by raising adequate awareness about the ways to cope with disasters and greater co-ordination between the centre and state agencies.
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Disaster
refers to the mishap, calamity or the grave occurrence from the natural or
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man
-made reasons which can’t be
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stopped
or tackled immediately by the
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affected
community. Earthquakes, cyclones, droughts, floods, etc. Are
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some of the
natural
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disasters
resulting in huge loss of
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lives
and properties. The direct or indirect impacts of
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disasters
, either natural or
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man
-made are colossal damage, destruction and death.

The
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disaster
management is the discipline by which human beings
continuously
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make
efforts to
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reduce
the harm caused by the
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disasters
. India has set up
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many
departments and organizations for the same such as national
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disaster
management authority (
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NDMA
).
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But
we are
yet
to achieve satisfactory progress with regard to timely management of
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disasters
. This can
be done
by raising adequate awareness about the ways to cope with
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disasters
and greater co-ordination between the
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centre
and state agencies.
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IELTS essay IV. Write a passage about how to prepare for a natural disasters ( about 100 words)

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
141 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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