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The use of animals for experiments has increased drastically.some people believe that it is necessary to use animals for experiments while others are totally against it Discuss both views and give your opinion

The use of animals for experiments has increased drastically. some people believe that it is necessary to use animals for experiments while others are totally against it Discuss both views and give your opinion BJL7V
It is true that, majority of experiments are biased on animals testing and it is debated that, whether, usages of animals for experiment is essential or not. This essay shall caste some light on both aspects along with my opinion in upcoming paragraphs. To commence, there are deluge of factors why individuals think that experiments on animals are necessary. The most preponderance is that, to analyse medicine reactions. Since scientists started to apply medicine on animals, it saves life of some humans. To cite an profound example, according to a survey conducted by "The Times of India "is that, around 98% laboratory experiments are dependent on animals Radically, animals testing also helpful for many discoveries. Before some time, there was no solution of some ailments such as cancer, HIV and AIDS so on. However, now it is possible by practising different medicine on animals Paradoxically, it may be not pivotal, animals have equal rights to live there life. some medicine are very harmful for health and body so, when these types of medicine apply on animals it may be caused various health hassle of animals even sometimes they died. For instance, majority of animals are victim by different chemicals when they tested in laboratories In conclusion, although it is good to do experiments on animals for knowledge, drawbacks of experiments on animals can not be dropped. According to my view of point testing on animals is important.
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are biased
on
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animals
testing and it
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that, whether, usages of
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animals
for
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experiment
is essential or not. This essay shall caste
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light on both aspects along with my opinion in upcoming paragraphs.

To commence, there are
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of factors why individuals
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think
that
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experiments
on
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animals
are necessary. The most preponderance is that, to
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analyse
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medicine
reactions. Since scientists
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started
to apply
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medicine
on
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animals
, it saves life of
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some
humans. To cite
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profound example, according to a survey conducted by
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The Times of India
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is that, around 98% laboratory
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experiments
are dependent on
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animals
Radically
,
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animals
testing
also
helpful for
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discoveries.
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Before
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time, there was no solution of
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ailments such as cancer, HIV and AIDS
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on.
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practising
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different
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medicine
on animals

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animals
have equal rights to
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live
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some
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medicine
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are
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harmful for health and body
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, when these types of
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apply on
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animals
it may
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animals
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are victim by
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chemicals when they
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tested
in
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laboratories


In conclusion
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animals
for knowledge, drawbacks of
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animals
can not
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. According to my view of point testing on
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animals
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IELTS essay The use of animals for experiments has increased drastically. some people believe that it is necessary to use animals for experiments while others are totally against it Discuss both views and give your opinion

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