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It’s me again. I have to come back to write about my journal notes. And I promise to myself to write somethi

It’s me again. I have to come back to write about my journal notes. And I promise to myself to write somethi gAWb1
It’s me again. I have to come back to write about my journal notes. And I promise to myself to write something every day and make it become a daily routine, don’t care what I ganna write. 
Today I just studied for 4-5 hours and I get tired of it. 
- I gradually see it in a boring way, I don’t know how it is? Cause it makes feel don’t feel flexible, don’t have any ideas for doing things. 
- I know i must try hard more, i can not find any documents about the things I wanna learn, I am bad at listening, speaking, when it happing i’m thinking a lot but don’t have the words in my mouth to say it out. It make me feel embarrassed and sad �� 
- Just study and I could not find any energy or get motivated on that lessons or some assignments I have got. 
- Being my best self, it was easy to say, in addition, it’s really to do. I don’t say any when I don’t think I can do it. 
- My family provides the money for me to study, especially they contribute a lot for me during the study, but sometimes I feel very guilty and clumsy, I’m not good, I’m ugly and don’t have any abilities to do things. 
- Everything also happens, i’m still here, just alone, sometimes I wanna say what the things I get over, the words they want to me, how hurt it was? I could say I’m very vulnerable and sometimes very tolerant of their wrong. 
- Love yourself also is a way to help you step away from the fake people, one day you’re always thinking about the wrong things that had happened to you, you cannot find somebody else to share your ideas, your stories, and I know it really hurts, it’s a way can kill myself every day. I always know to think about the happy life, happiness smile, and have a happy family, don’t talk about the rich family just a normal family for really enough for them. 
- When somebody else coming into our life, gives our life a flame, they share the stories with me, that’s really make me feel happy, but then they have to leave out our life, and poted for us many believe. - I know when I say these words it is quite foolish, but I like it. More and more days, I gradually like the words I’m saying in this note. How many things I wanna say but nobody else can share with me. I save up money time for the internet. I know it doesn’t bring any advantages for me, maybe the next day I’ll focus on my study, don’t do the same as today. It was a bad thing, I have to make progress now and in my career future. Don’t be lazily and just laying in bed like this. And now it is 23: 32, I’m writing something about the things I wanna say. - I love the ways to do it every day, and make sure you always bear the promise in my mind, don’t forget it, focus as impossible as, it quite late now, I’m going to turn off my laptop, and I‘ll watch some videos on YouTube until it 12: 00 and I have to switch off my laptop and take it away and then I must to go to bed, cause I have a class tomorrow, and I must remember my promise with myself- Dear myself, every day is the opportunities, everything still happing, you have to happy/ succusses/ to be your best version.
It’s me again. I
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it become a daily routine, don’t care what I
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Today
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studied for 4-5 hours and I
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I
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see
it
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how it is? Cause it
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don’t
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flexible, don’t have any
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ideas
for doing things. 

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I
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i
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try
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more,
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can not find any documents about the things I
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wanna
learn, I am
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at listening, speaking, when
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it happing
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i’m
thinking a lot
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don’t have the words in my mouth to say it out. It
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make
me
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embarrassed and sad
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and I could not find any energy or
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motivated on that lessons or
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some
assignments I have
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got
. 

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Being my best self, it was easy to say,
in addition
, it’s
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really
to do. I don’t say any when I don’t
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think
I can do it. 

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My
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family
provides the money for me to
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study
,
especially
they contribute a lot for me during the
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study
,
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but
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sometimes
I
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feel
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very
guilty and clumsy, I’m not
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good
, I’m ugly and don’t have any abilities to do things. 

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Everything
also
happens,
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i’m
still
here,
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just
alone,
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sometimes
I
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wanna
say what the things I
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get
over, the words they want to me, how hurt it was? I could say I’m
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vulnerable and
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tolerant of their
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wrong
. 

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Love
yourself
also
is a way to
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help
you step away from the fake
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people
, one day you’re always thinking about the
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wrong
things that had happened to you, you cannot find somebody else to share your
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ideas
, your stories, and I
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know
it
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really
hurts, it’s a way can kill myself every day. I always
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know
to
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think
about the happy
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life
, happiness smile, and have a happy
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family
, don’t talk about the rich
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family
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just
a normal
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family
for
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really
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enough
for them. 

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When somebody else coming into our
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life
, gives our
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life
a flame, they share the stories with me, that’s
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really
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make
me
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feel
happy,
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but
then they
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have to
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out our
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life
, and
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poted
for us
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believe.
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I
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know
when I say these words it is quite foolish,
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but
I like it. More and more days, I
gradually
like the words I’m saying in this note. How
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many
things I
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wanna
say
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but
nobody else can share with me. I save up money time for the internet. I
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know
it doesn’t bring any advantages for me, maybe the
next
day I’ll focus on my
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study
, don’t do the same as
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today
. It was a
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bad
thing, I
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have to
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progress
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and in my career future. Don’t be
lazily
and
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just
laying in bed like this. And
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now
it is 23: 32, I’m writing something about the things I
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wanna
say.
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I
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love
the ways to do it every day, and
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sure you always bear the promise in my mind, don’t forget it, focus as impossible as,
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it
quite late
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now
, I’m going to turn off my laptop, and I‘ll
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watch
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some
videos on YouTube until it 12: 00 and I
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have to
switch off my laptop and take it away and then I
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must to
go to bed,
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cause I
have a
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tomorrow, and I
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must
remember my promise with myself- Dear myself, every day is the opportunities, everything
still
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happing
, you
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happy/
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succusses
/ to be your best version.
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IELTS essay It’s me again. I have to come back to write about my journal notes. And I promise to myself to write somethi

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
611 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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