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Its claimed by some people companies have to apply

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Commencing with, there are some reasons, why they want to spend money on uniforms. First and foremost merits is that after wearing uniform they seen attractive as compared to others. As well as, all the employee are know by dressing identity. Moreover, as they become more handsome than wear casual clothes. Secondly, people can judge them by their uniform so then it will be easy for everyone to know the company brand and name as well. For istance, a survey conducted by an international company the sale of their products is increased rapidly after given uniforms to their worker's. On the contrary side, there are several effects behind in. If the workers are wearing their daily schedule clothes without wearing uniform they will do more focus on work then the result definitely will be better rather than wearing uniform becaus, most of the uniforms are incomfortable. Moving firthe, the all companies should be seen the productivity and manufacturing of their products as it will be beneficial for their company economy. However, they should not spend amount of money on uniforms. As a result, they should maintain the workers promotion as well their wages. To conclude, although the uniforms have the identity of company and organization. It has more importance in our whole world.
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reasons, why they want to spend money on
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uniforms
.
First
and foremost merits is that after wearing
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uniform
they
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seen
attractive as compared to others.
As well
as, all the employee are know by dressing identity.
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, as they become more handsome than wear casual clothes.
Secondly
,
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people
can judge them by their
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uniform
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then it will be easy for everyone to know the
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company
brand and name
as well
. For
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istance
, a survey conducted by an international
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company
the sale of their products
is increased
rapidly
after
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given
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uniforms
to their worker's.
On the contrary
side, there are several effects behind in. If the workers are wearing their daily schedule clothes without wearing
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uniform
they will do more focus on work then the result definitely will be better
rather
than wearing
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uniform
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becaus
, most of the
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uniforms
are
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incomfortable
. Moving
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firthe
, the all
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companies
should be
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seen
the productivity and manufacturing of their products as it will be beneficial for their
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company
economy.
However
, they should not spend amount of money on
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uniforms
.
As a result
, they should maintain the
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workers
promotion
as well
their wages.
To conclude
, although the
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uniforms
have the identity of
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company
and organization. It has more importance in our whole world.
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IELTS essay Its claimed by some people companies have to apply

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
213 words
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