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Describe an art or craft that you had at school. What you made.how you made. What is look like. How you felt about the activity.

Describe an art or craft that you had at school. What you made. how you made. What is look like. How you felt about the activity. nEyG2
I have done many cross in my childhood which gives me Presentation and prices today I would like to talk about one particular order which I had made in my school time the painting which I made is Mona Lisa one of the leading leading painting in the leading industry in the painting industry I made this painting by using the oil paint and using one different type of papers which are used for only this international and limited paintsThe painting is looks likes in two different ways the person who sees the painting from some distance can easily identify only one way of one side of painting moreover coming to the second side the painting has the meaning of the environment and an alive how he did it the interesting part of this painting is I have been jointed all the languages in our nation to complete the painting and in that case I have achieved a wonderful prize amount from our mayor and moreover he gives me a lot of confidence and support to make this type of paintings in my colony in my area I feel very proud by seeing claps from the audience and the visitors who came to see my painting at a time.
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cross in my childhood which gives me Presentation and prices
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I would like to talk about one particular order which I had made in my school time the
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which I made is Mona Lisa one of the
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leading leading
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painting
in the leading industry in the
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industry I made this
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by using the oil paint and using one
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type of papers which are
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is looks likes in two
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one way of one side of
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moreover
coming to the second side the
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painting
has the meaning of the environment and an alive how he did it the interesting part of this
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painting
is I have
been jointed
all the languages in our nation to complete the
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painting
and
in that case
I have achieved a wonderful prize amount from our mayor and
moreover
he gives me
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a lot of
confidence and support to
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make
this type of
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paintings
in my colony in my area I feel
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proud by seeing claps from the audience and the visitors who came to
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my
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IELTS essay Describe an art or craft that you had at school. What you made. how you made. What is look like. How you felt about the activity.

Essay
  American English
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209 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
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