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It was getting dark and I was completely lost

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It was getting dark and I was completely lost. I guessed I was so far from my granny’s cottage as there were a vast number of huge trees encircled me. A while later, I finally breathed a sign of relief as I had found the way out of that murky forest and reached my grandmother’s cottage. I entered happily and went to my grandma’s bedside. “My! What big eyes you have! Grandma! ” I shouted terrifyingly. She replied that those helped her see more clearly at night. I felt something was infinitely weird but I wasn’t sure about it then I pointed at her teeth and said. “What big teeth you have! ” A big black wolf jumped out and pounced on me forcefully as soon as it replied “All the better to eat you with! ” It happened so suddenly that I could only screamed desperately. Then, the woodcutters came to the cottage and beat the bad wolf. They rescued my granny, who had been locked up in the cuboard, and me. We hugged each other with joy. It was such a memorable experience for me!
It was getting dark and I was completely lost. I guessed I was
so
far from my granny’s cottage as there were a vast number of huge trees encircled me.

A while later, I
finally
breathed a
sign
of relief as I had found the way out of that murky forest and reached my grandmother’s cottage. I entered
happily
and went to my grandma’s bedside. “My! What
big
eyes you have! Grandma! ” I shouted
terrifyingly
. She replied that those
helped
her
see
more
clearly
at night. I felt something was
infinitely
weird
but
I wasn’t sure about it then I pointed at her teeth and said. “What
big
teeth you have! ” A
big
black wolf jumped out and pounced on me
forcefully
as
soon
as it replied “All the better to eat you with! ”

It happened
so
suddenly
that I could
only
screamed
desperately
. Then, the woodcutters came to the cottage and beat the
bad
wolf. They rescued my granny, who had
been locked
up in the
cuboard
, and me. We hugged each other with joy. It was such a memorable experience for me!
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IELTS essay It was getting dark and I was completely lost

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
187 words
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