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It said that the fast pace of our everyday life, as a direct result of the rapid development of telecommunication technology and the travel industry, has negative effects on individuals, nations, and the globe. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In today's world, the rapid pace of innovation in technology, communications, and travel, has led to dramatic changes in life and made it a fast life. Although these changes make life better in many ways, many, including me, believe that their disadvantages cannot be easily ignored. The negative impacts of the fast-paced life resulting from the advancement of technology in both people’s interactions and movement, which is moving at an incredible speed, could be portrayed in three different scales; personal, national, and global. On a personal level, first of all, it is a fact that most people are under intense pressure and a lot of mental stress because they have to put tremendous effort into adapting themselves to this speed. Designers, for example, are faced with new gadgets and architectural applications that are introduced one after the other, creating a new challenge for them because they have to be up to date to get or keep their job. At the second scale (communities), it is obvious that family relationships are compromised because of the limited time that their members have to spend together and is accelerated by establishing virtual connections through social media such as Facebook or WhatsApp so many people may experience failed marriage, which is undoubtedly a problem for communities. On a universal scale, there is a myriad of technology-driven flights that not only does contribute to global warming but also increasing noise pollution. Every day, large amounts of carbon dioxide and other gases are being emitted into the atmosphere, which has a major impact on the climate system. Also, those who are close to airports are very affected by noise, they may face some problems such as sleep disorders. Admittedly, it is true that advances in technology have made it more convenient for us to travel or communicate than ever before. For example, we can be in contact with a friend or family member via a state-of-the-art device even in out-of-the-way areas or be on the move to visit another part of the world. However, this cutting-edge technology has brought with it a whole new set of problems. In conclusion, it appears that the satisfaction of a modern lifestyle, new experiences through the acquisition of advanced devices should not make us forget the side effects of these changes. We need to grasp the magnitude of the unfavorable effect in order to find effective solutions.
In
today
's world, the rapid pace of innovation in
technology
, communications, and travel, has led to dramatic
changes
in
life
and made it a
fast
life
. Although these
changes
make
life
better in
many
ways,
many
, including me, believe that their disadvantages cannot be
easily
ignored
.

The
negative
impacts of the
fast
-paced
life
resulting from the advancement of
technology
in both
people
’s interactions and movement, which is moving at an incredible speed, could
be portrayed
in three
different
scales; personal, national, and global. On a personal level,
first
of all, it is a fact that most
people
are under intense pressure and
a lot of
mental
stress
because
they
have to
put tremendous effort into adapting themselves to this speed. Designers,
for example
,
are faced
with
new
gadgets and architectural applications that
are introduced
one after the other, creating a
new
challenge for them
because
they
have to
be up to date to
get
or
keep
their job. At the second scale (communities), it is obvious that family relationships
are compromised
because
of the limited time that their members
have to
spend together and
is accelerated
by establishing virtual connections through social media such as Facebook or WhatsApp
so
many
people
may experience failed marriage, which is
undoubtedly
a problem for communities. On a universal scale, there is a myriad of technology-driven flights that not
only
does contribute to global warming
but
also
increasing noise pollution. Every day, large amounts of carbon dioxide and other gases are
being emitted
into the atmosphere, which has a major impact on the climate system.
Also
, those who are close to airports are
very
affected
by noise, they may face
some
problems such as sleep disorders.

Admittedly
, it is true that advances in
technology
have made it more convenient for us to travel or communicate than ever
before
.
For example
, we can be in contact with a friend or family member via a state-of-the-art device even in out-of-the-way areas or be on the
move
to visit another part of the world.
However
, this cutting-edge
technology
has brought with it a whole
new
set of problems.

In conclusion
, it appears that the satisfaction of a modern lifestyle,
new
experiences through the acquisition of advanced devices should not
make
us forget the side effects of these
changes
. We need to grasp the magnitude of the unfavorable effect in order to find effective solutions.
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IELTS essay It said that the fast pace of our everyday life, as a direct result of the rapid development of telecommunication technology and the travel industry, has negative effects on individuals, nations, and the globe.

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