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It is usually thought that robots will occupy a dramatically crucial place all over our world in the future. This essay humbly will explain how robots will can be used by day by and the positive aspects of this improvement.

It is usually thought that robots will occupy a dramatically crucial place all over our world in the future. This essay humbly will explain how robots will can be used by day by and the positive aspects of this improvement. e52VA
It is usually thought that robots will occupy a dramatically crucial place all over our world in the future. This essay humbly will explain how robots will can be used by day by and the positive aspects of this improvement. There is no doubt that robots will be used in various areas in the coming years but by far the most affective one is space exploration. Today, many studies are carried out for robots to take part in space research. Provided that robots will be sent instead of humans by spacecraft, in this way, robots will be damaged instead of humans in case of a possible risk. Thus, many researches for the benefit of humanity will be faster and more effective. To give a clear example, according to the result of study conducted by National Aeronautics and Space Administration, robots who are at space now will inform us about life findings on Mars by observing. This way, you can perhaps travel to the red planet in the future. This advancement is literally more and more essential for mankind, to colonize at different planets due to the fact that natural resources are beginning to run out in the world. In addition, it is a known fact that the abilities of robots are not comparing with the abilities of humans, and robots must be sent to Mars for deeper investigations. Moreover, these kinds of studies will benefit our world. In conclusion, majority of people believe that robots will take an important place in every field all over our world. Although there are many examples of this, one of the most prominent examples is space studies for the advancement of technology. It is an undeniable fact that should robots will use more in the future, humans will live more comfortably.
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space
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will inform us about life findings on Mars by observing. This way, you can perhaps travel to the red planet in the future.

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planets due to the fact that natural resources are beginning to run out in the world.
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place in every field all over our world. Although there are
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examples of this, one of the most prominent examples is
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space
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for the advancement of technology. It is an undeniable fact that should robots will
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use
more in the future,
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IELTS essay It is usually thought that robots will occupy a dramatically crucial place all over our world in the future. This essay humbly will explain how robots will can be used by day by and the positive aspects of this improvement.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
297 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.5
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