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It is usually argued that printed sources will disappear in the future and people will use PDF form of all these reading materials.personally, I firmly disagree with this opinion becouse not only printed newspapers and books will always have a place in our lives but also it is more popular than the digital one.

It is usually argued that printed sources will disappear in the future and people will use PDF form of all these reading materials. personally, I firmly disagree with this opinion becouse not only printed newspapers and books will always have a place in our lives but also it is more popular than the digital one. yx99d
It is usually argued that printed sources will disappear in the future and people will use PDF form of all these reading materials. personally, I firmly disagree with this opinion becouse not only printed newspapers and books will always have a place in our lives but also it is more popular than the digital one. On one hand, not all digital books and newspapers will be free of charge in the future. for instance, people may found some websites what published it’s essays without having to pay anything. However, popular online newspapers, such as society or environment offer subscription for full access to their contents. In addition, online reading has some drawbacks. Reading online articles on screen not only can disorder readers concentration but also can damage their vision. On the other hand, there is always be people who prefer to buy physical books and newspapers for many reasons. Firstly, many people want to buy printed materials because they value the experience of reading and collecting physical books. For example some teenagers are seek to buy every paperbacks written their favorite authors because they enjoy building their own physical collection. In sumup, I strongly disagree with the statement that people no longer pay for printed newspapers and books. since in my opinion online reading has some disadvantages, people would prefer to read by physical materials
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sources will disappear in the future and
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people
will
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use
PDF form of all these
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materials.
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personally
, I
firmly
disagree with this opinion
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printed
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books
will always have a place in our
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lives
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but
also
it is more popular than the digital one.

On one hand, not all digital
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books
and
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newspapers
will be free of charge in the future.
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people
may found
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some
websites what published
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it’s
essays without having to pay anything.
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, popular
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online
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newspapers
, such as society or environment offer subscription for full access to their contents.
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,
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online
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Reading
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online
articles on screen not
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can disorder readers concentration
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but
also
can damage their vision.

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, there is always be
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people
who prefer to
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books
and
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newspapers
for
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materials
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because
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reading
and collecting
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physical
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books
.
For example
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some
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teenagers
are seek to
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paperbacks
written their favorite authors
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own
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collection.

In
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, I
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disagree with the statement that
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people
no longer pay for
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printed
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newspapers
and
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books
.
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since
in my opinion
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online
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reading
has
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disadvantages,
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people
would prefer to read by
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physical
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materials
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IELTS essay It is usually argued that printed sources will disappear in the future and people will use PDF form of all these reading materials. personally, I firmly disagree with this opinion becouse not only printed newspapers and books will always have a place in our lives but also it is more popular than the digital one.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
224 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
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