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I, Muhammad Waris, father of Muhammad Musa, shall be financially responsible for his expenses for the period he will be studying in North Island College, British Columbia. This letter serves as my support for the aforementioned individual’s visa application. Musa shall be visiting your country for a study purpose. I shall serve as the applicant’s financial sponsor and will be covering all the expenses for this period.

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Musa
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 responsible for his expenses for the period he will be studying in North Island College, British Columbia. This letter serves as my support for the aforementioned individual’s visa application. Possible spelling mistake found.MustUSAMesaMuseMuskMush
Musa
 shall be visiting your country for a study purpose. I shall serve as the applicant’s financial sponsor and will be covering all the expenses for this period. 

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IELTS essay if he goes to dubai there will

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