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Write and describe the steps of a process performed either by a person or a machine.

Write and describe the steps of a process performed either by a person or a machine. WnkQD
I’m going to describe how to make pizza dough. Pizza dough is the foundation and every great pizza begins with a great pizza crust. First of all, the flour is put in the large bowl, Next, the yeast and salt are stirred. Then, Warm water and olive oil is poured and are brought together with spoon until a soft, fairly wet dough is made. After that, the dough is turned onto a lightly floured surface and is kneaded for 10 min until smooth. , In the next stage, it is covered with a towel and is set aside until The dough is risen. Finally, it split into some balls and it rolled out on the floured surface in to large rounds.
I’m going to
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describe
how to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
pizza
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dough
. Pizza
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dough
is the foundation and every great pizza
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begins
with a great pizza crust.

This phrase is redundant. Consider using "first".
First of all
, the flour
is put
in the large bowl,
Next
, the yeast and salt
are stirred
. Then, Warm water and olive oil
is poured
and
are brought
together with spoon until a soft,
fairly
wet
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
dough
is made
. After that, the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
dough
is turned
onto a
lightly
floured surface and
is kneaded
for 10 min until smooth.
Loose punctuation mark.
,
In the
next
stage, it
is covered
with a towel and
is set
aside until The
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
dough
is risen
.
Finally
, it split into
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
balls and it rolled out on the floured surface in to large rounds.
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IELTS essay Write and describe the steps of a process performed either by a person or a machine.

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
121 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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