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science park 2008 up to the present

science park 2008 up to the present RRL7W

The two given illustrations show the development underwent by the science park. As can be seen, the park was expanded to build more areas for research and education. According to the first figure, the green spaces situated in the N-W and the S-E, have been replaced with a research and development department and the cyber security building had included a massive extension, while reducing the car park size. Furthermore, the reception area was rehabilitated and used for university purpose. Also, in the N-E, a bus stop was added for improving park accessibility. Turning to the southern part of the park, the IT centre has been transformed into an Innovation centre. In addition, a new train station has been created alongside the walkways that are connected to various facilities. Finally, there are new biking routes located in the middle and upper areas. Overall, the major alterations are the reduced green zones, the advanced infrastructure and the new building for the research and development division.

The two This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accorded
given
 illustrations This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :demonstrateportrayindicatedisplay
show
 the development underwent by the science You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
park
. As can be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
seen
, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
park
was expanded
 to build more areas for research and education.

According to the first
 figure, the green spaces situated in the N-W and the S-E, have been replaced
 with a research and development department and the cyber security building had included a massive extension, while reducing the car You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
park
 size. Furthermore
, the reception area was rehabilitated
 and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 for university purpose. Also
, in the N-E, a bus This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :terminateceasediscontinue
stop
 was This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accrued
added
 for improving You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
park
 accessibility.

Turning to the southern part of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
park
, the IT Possible spelling mistake. 'centre' is British English.center
centre
 has been transformed
 into an Innovation Possible spelling mistake. 'centre' is British English.center
centre
. In addition
, a new train station has been created
 alongside the walkways that are connected
 to various facilities. Finally
, there are new biking routes located in the middle and upper areas.

Overall
, the major alterations are the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alleviated
reduced
 green zones, the advanced infrastructure and the new building for the research and development division. 