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I, Muhammad Waris currently residing in UAE, and I am a citizen of Pakistan This letter is to inform that I, Muhammad Waris confirm my sponsorship for Muhammad Musa, supporting my relationship with the student as father. Muhammad Musa, will be studying here North Island College, British Columbia for the duration of two years. He will be visiting Canada for study from January, 2022 to December, 2023.

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in UAE
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 confirm my sponsorship for Muhammad Possible spelling mistake found.MustUSAMesaMuseMuskMush
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, will be studying here North Island College, British Columbia for the duration of two years. He will be visiting Canada for study from When specifying a month and year, the comma is unnecessary: "January 2022".January 2022
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IELTS essay i will be going there for sudy

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American English

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67 words

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