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It is thought by some that it is better to live in a city while others believe that life is better in the countryside. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

Most people now live in cities. While some believe that living in urban areas is more advantageous, others think that life in rural areas is more beneficial. In this essay I will discuss why living in the countryside is good but why to settle in metropolis is more recommendable. On the one hand, some prefer to live in the countryside because it is less polluted, rents are cheaper and individuals can relax more. To illustrate, people living far from cities often express that the air is cleaner where they live and that they are usually not in a rush. Also, it can easily be found in online rental websites that rent prices in cities are higher than those in rural areas. The countryside is not only cheaper and cleaner than cities but also offers a stress-free lifestyle. In spite of the advantages that rural areas offer, living in metropolis is more convenient. In order to live a good life, jobs, amenities, schools and hospitals are needed. In cities people become easily employed. They can get different kinds of food, they can go to college and can be cured if they become ill. For example, if someone gets fired, other jobs are available in cities. If someone is allergic to a specific kind of food, he or she can go to the supermarket and find non-allergenic products. Students in urban areas can go to university and everybody has access to medical treatment there. Urban areas offer several opportunities for people. Individuals can live either in urban or rural areas. This essay stated why living in the countryside is advantageous but why metropolis have more to offer. In my opinion, the lives of people are more fulfilling when they live in cities.
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is more advantageous, others
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think
that life in
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is more beneficial. In this essay I will discuss why
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living
in the
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is
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good
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why to settle in metropolis is more recommendable.

On the one hand,
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prefer to
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because
it is less polluted, rents are cheaper and individuals can relax more. To illustrate,
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people
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living
far from
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cities
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often
express that the air is cleaner where they
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and that they are
usually
not in a rush.
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, it can
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be found
in online rental websites that rent prices in
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cities
are higher than those in
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rural
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areas
. The
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cheaper and cleaner than
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rural
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,
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in metropolis is more convenient. In order to
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life, jobs, amenities, schools and hospitals
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In
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become
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different
kinds of food, they can go to college and can
be cured
if they become ill.
For example
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gets
fired, other jobs are available in
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cities
. If someone is allergic to a specific kind of food, he or she can go to the supermarket and find non-allergenic products. Students in
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urban
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areas
can go to university and everybody has access to medical treatment there.
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Urban
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areas
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several opportunities for
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people
.

Individuals can
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either in
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or
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areas
. This essay stated why
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living
in the
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countryside
is advantageous
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but
why metropolis have more to
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offer
. In my opinion, the
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lives
of
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people
are more fulfilling when they
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live
in
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cities
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IELTS essay It is thought by some that it is better to live in a city while others believe that life is better in the countryside.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
290 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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