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Some feel that school uniforms make schools safer for students, create a "level playing field" that reduces socioeconomic disparities and encourage children to focus on their studies rather than their clothes. Others say school uniforms infringe upon students' right to express their individuality, have no positive effect on behavior and academic achievement. Discuss both sides & give your opinion.

It is argued that school uniforms maintain integrity and creates shield for school-goers from distractions such as caste, status and so on among underprivileged and fairly affluent students. While others believe that these have no adverse effect on education and code of conduct. This essay will elaborate both the views and I opine that implementation of dress code will have minimal merits. Firstly, Every scholars should be treated equally irrespective of all discriminations and maintain harmony which can be imposed by wearing same outfits. This act not only bring quality and unity but also discipline among the individuals Secondly, Although crime rate cannot be reduced, this will deter to greater extend. Thirdly, if Students were wearing similar clothes, it is easier to keep track of students on field trips and make intruders on campus more visible. To sight an instance, Even though some schools have RFID and swiping machines to allow the students enter into premises, uniforms will abruptly segregate at first glance by securities in order to avoid any mischievous activities. on the bright side, Imposing such act on institutions will restrict the students from their freedom of expressions. Besides, This may have a detrimental effect on students self-image. Moreover, these school attires are driven by commercial interests rather than educational ones. For instance, a famous brand name called mafatlal which is from Gujarat, India has made tremendous profits targeting both public and private kids. Furthermore, This has become a billion dollar business only who sells gets benefitted. To sum up, It is clearly evident that such policy has no more significant effect on learners, despite having some benefits.
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that school uniforms maintain integrity and creates shield for school-goers from distractions such as caste, status and
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on among underprivileged and
fairly
affluent
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students
. While others believe that these have no adverse effect on education and code of conduct. This essay will elaborate both the views and I opine that implementation of dress code will have minimal merits.

Firstly
, Every
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scholars
should
be treated
equally
irrespective of all discriminations and maintain harmony which can
be imposed
by wearing same outfits. This act not
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only
bring quality and unity
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but
also
discipline among the individuals

Secondly
, Although crime rate cannot be
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reduced
, this will deter to greater extend.
Thirdly
, if
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Students
were wearing similar clothes, it is easier to
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keep
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track
of
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students
on field trips and
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make
intruders on campus more visible. To sight an instance,
Even though
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some
schools have RFID and swiping machines to
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allow
the
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students
enter into premises, uniforms will
abruptly
segregate at
first
glance by securities in order to avoid any mischievous activities.

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on
the bright side, Imposing such act on institutions will restrict the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
students
from their freedom of expressions.
Besides
, This may have a detrimental effect on
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
students
self-image.
Moreover
, these school attires
are driven
by commercial interests
rather
than educational ones.
For instance
, a
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famous
brand name called
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mafatlal
which is from Gujarat, India has made tremendous profits targeting both public and private kids.
Furthermore
, This has become a billion dollar business
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
who sells
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gets
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benefitted
.

To sum up, It is
clearly
evident that such policy has no more significant effect on learners, despite having
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some
benefits.

IELTS essay Some feel that school uniforms make schools safer for students, create a "level playing field" that reduces socioeconomic disparities and encourage children to focus on their studies rather than their clothes. Others say school uniforms infringe upon students' right to express their individuality, have no positive effect on behavior and academic achievement.

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4 paragraphs
270 words
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