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As a rise in the population of a country and the need to build more homes Is it important to build more homes in the city or the country side?

There is a growth in the population of a nation and the need to build more homes. This essay agrees it is beneficial to develop houses in the rural areas. Firstly, it will help reduce the environmental pollution faced in the metropolitan areas and secondly, this would bring down the overpopulated areas in cities. To begin with, environmental pollution is one of the biggest challenges faced in the city and the main type is the air pollution. This has to do with the discharge of harmful gaseous substance into the air as a result of the high number of cars and high powered engines from various companies and as such would have great effect on the health of city dwellers. Developing the rural areas would ensure that pollution faced in the cities is reduced drastically, creating a safer space for people to live. Furthermore, one major issues faced in the city is overpopulation and this have been attributed to the various amenities available to make one successful in the city. government needs to come up with rural developmental policies that would help migrate people form the city to rural places. Amenities such as good living condition. For instance in Nigeria, the population of people who reside in Lagos have reduced by 25% after the development of the suburbs. To conclude, I completely agree that developing the rural areas is advantageous because this would help reduce the amount of pollution faced in the city and bring down the overpopulated locations in the city.
There is a growth in the population of a nation and the need to build more homes. This essay
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agrees
it is beneficial to develop
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houses
in the
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rural
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.
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, it will
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help
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reduce
the environmental
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pollution
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in the metropolitan
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areas
and
secondly
, this would bring down the overpopulated
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areas
in cities.

To
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begin
with, environmental
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pollution
is one of the biggest challenges
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faced
in the city and the main type is the air
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pollution
. This
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has to
do with the discharge of harmful gaseous substance into the air
as a result
of the high number of cars and
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high powered
engines from various
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companies
and as such would have great effect on the health of city dwellers. Developing the
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rural
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areas
would ensure that
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pollution
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faced
in the
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cities
is
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reduced
drastically
, creating a safer space for
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people
to
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live
.

Furthermore
, one major issues
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in the city is overpopulation and this have
been attributed
to the various amenities available to
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make
one successful in the city.
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government
needs to
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come
up with
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rural
developmental policies that would
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help
migrate
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people
form the city to
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rural
places. Amenities such as
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good
living condition.
For instance
in Nigeria, the population of
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people
who reside in Lagos have
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reduced
by 25% after the development of the suburbs.

To conclude
, I completely
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agree
that developing the
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rural
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areas
is advantageous
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because
this would
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help
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reduce
the amount of
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pollution
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faced
in the city and bring down the overpopulated locations in the city.
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IELTS essay As a rise in the population of a country and the need to build more homes Is it important to build more homes in the city or the country side?

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
252 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 6.5
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