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In the future nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying.

It is true that online reading getting more and more popular and some people believe that it will replace newspapers and paper books as these could be found on the internet for free. While I disagree with this viewpoint. On the one hand, printed literature will always e needed due to its unique function and advantages. Firstly, printing words on paper can protect our eyes, therefore parents and teachers courage us to read paper books rather than electric books. Secondly, books are not only knowledge that help people to form their world value, but are also collections for those who are enthusiastic with books. Finally, newspaper could also be torn int pieces as decorations. For example, I like buying newspapers just to decorate my bookshelves or furniture. On the other hand, although online e-books will partly replace some paper books, it will definitely need to be paid. Reading outcomes of writers freely is morally wrong because those efforts need to be given certain rewards. A Chinese journalist, for instance, spent 40 years visiting the areas which were suffering from wars. She risked her life to reveal the truth and as a result, we cannot take her efforts away without even paying. Besides that, related institutions are paying more attentions to copyright of literature. This means that everyone need to be charged if they want to enjoy the diversity of knowledge from books. In conclusion, it seems to me that online reading will never dominate the market without paying and people will be willing to purchase the printed works in the future.
It is true that online reading getting more and more popular and
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some
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people
believe that it will replace newspapers and paper
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
books
as these could
be found
on the internet for free.
“While” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
While
I disagree with this viewpoint.

On the one hand, printed literature will always e needed due to its unique function and advantages.
Firstly
, printing words on paper can protect our eyes,
therefore
parents and teachers courage us to read paper
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
books
rather
than electric
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books
.
Secondly
,
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books
are not
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only
knowledge that
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help
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people
to form their world value,
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but
are
also
collections for those who are enthusiastic with
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
books
.
Finally
, newspaper could
also
be torn
int pieces as decorations.
For example
, I like buying newspapers
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just
to decorate my bookshelves or furniture.

On the other hand
, although online e-books will partly replace
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
paper
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
books
, it will definitely need to
be paid
. Reading outcomes of writers
freely
is
morally
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wrong
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because
those efforts need to be
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
given
certain rewards. A Chinese journalist,
for instance
, spent 40 years visiting the areas which were suffering from wars. She risked her life to reveal the truth and
as a result
, we cannot take her efforts away without even paying.
Besides
that, related institutions are paying more attentions to copyright of literature. This means that everyone need to
be charged
if they want to enjoy the diversity of knowledge from books.

In conclusion
, it seems to me that online reading will never dominate the market without paying and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
will be willing to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
purchase
the printed works in the future.

IELTS essay In the future nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
261 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
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