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It is thought by some that it is better to live in a city while others believe that life is better in the countryside. Discuss both sides and give your opinion

It is thought by some that it is better to live in a city while others believe that life is better in the countryside. Discuss both sides and give your opinion EGPQ
Some people believe that residing in an urban area far outweighs a life in a rural area. I agree with the statement that living in the countryside is inferior to leading a life in a city. Firstly, the quality of life in an urban area according to some people’s beliefs surpasses that in rural places. It is clear that in this fast-paced world the authorities place a high value on the betterment of infrastructure and lifestyle in cities. With all the groundbreaking advancements in the sphere of technology which have revolutionized our lives since its advent and all major developments taking place nowadays factored in, those in power keep improving the standards of life in cities and metropolises, neglecting their responsibility of developing and modernizing countries. The president of Russia Vladimir Putin is a prime example, who is notorious for abundantly satisfying the life needs and standards of those residing in metropolises of Russia, as opposed to equally allocating resources and the sources of technology to both areas. However, another group of people consider the countryside to be a better place for living. Life in the countryside is more often than not associated with tranquility, peace and especially unadulterated air. It is widely believed that a number of lung diseases stem from being constantly exposed to polluted air in cities and therefore many show a big preference for living in rural areas instead of urban areas so as to evade chronic lung conditions and lead a peaceful and stress-free life as well. Despite this, taking into account the fact that the governments still glorify urban places and continue earmarking hundreds of millions of dollars for boosting their infrastructure, overlooking the importance of life in remote areas, residing in a city is bound to be the best option. In conclusion, considering that cities pride themselves upon providing their inhabitants with all the latest cutting-edge technology and the improvements in each and every aspect of life and also with considerable financial muscle being invested in urban areas, I maintain that living in the countryside is less promising and outpowered by the life in cities on the grounds that all the best resources and the governmental attention go to the latter.
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believe that residing in an
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far outweighs a
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in a rural
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. I
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agree
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countryside
is inferior to leading a
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life
in a city.

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, the quality of
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life
in an
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urban
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area
according to
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some
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’s beliefs surpasses that in rural
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places
. It is
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clear
that in this
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fast
-paced world the authorities
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place
a high value on the betterment of infrastructure and lifestyle in
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cities
. With all the groundbreaking advancements in the sphere of technology which have revolutionized our
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lives
since its advent and all major developments taking
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place
nowadays factored in, those in power
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keep
improving the standards of
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life
in
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cities
and metropolises, neglecting their responsibility of developing and modernizing countries. The president of Russia Vladimir Putin is a prime example, who is notorious for
abundantly
satisfying the
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life
needs and standards of those residing in metropolises of Russia, as opposed to
equally
allocating resources and the sources of technology to both areas.

However
, another group of
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people
consider the
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countryside
to be a better
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for
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living
.
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in the
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is more
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often
than not associated with tranquility, peace and
especially
unadulterated air. It is
widely
believed that a number of lung diseases stem from being
constantly
exposed to polluted air in
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cities
and
therefore
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a
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preference for
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instead
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evade chronic lung conditions and lead a peaceful and
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. Despite this, taking into account the fact that the
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still
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and continue earmarking hundreds of millions of dollars for boosting their infrastructure, overlooking the importance of
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in remote
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, residing in a city
is bound
to be the best option.

In conclusion
, considering that
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cities
pride themselves upon providing their inhabitants with all the latest cutting-edge technology and the improvements in each and every aspect of
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life
and
also
with considerable financial muscle
being invested
in
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urban
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areas
, I maintain that
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living
in the
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is less promising and
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outpowered
by the
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life
in
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cities
on the grounds that all the best resources and the governmental attention go to the latter.
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IELTS essay It is thought by some that it is better to live in a city while others believe that life is better in the countryside. Discuss both sides and give your opinion

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