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If you ask me whether " Teaching children at home is best for a child’s development or not? ". I would absoluty say that I disagree  with this statement, I know it is up to me to decide, but frankly speaking I have got some reasons for my choose. Theses days, teaching plays very important role in all aspects of life, whether for children, young people or old people. There are many values of teaching  children at school, firstly, it makes children learn better than teaching at home, so this can be facilitating the teacher's teaching methods of learning the courses. Also, if the students faced  dificultes in learning any subject, they can take a help from their colleges, they  can share their thoughts and ideas together and can be benifits from each other. In contrast with teaching at home, there are some important points we should consider and take into account, one of them is at home  students  may not have anyone to help them in useing the schools' website and  they will suffer more in  using the electronical methods that helping in intering the online classroom, as the teacher suffer too. Moreover, during the  examinations learners will feel  worried about their exam and the problem that will affect and make them to loose their marks. Before I conclude I should say that, teaching at  at home is not a good way in teaching, and I prefere teaching at school, because I think this way of methods can help the students to get the information easier than at home, also the teachers can  use  many methods of teaching, but not only one way. Finaly, Teachers also can catch their student's attentions by using this methods of teaching contrloe their classroom in easy way.
If you ask me whether
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"
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children
at home is best for a child’s development or not?
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. I would
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absoluty
say that I disagree
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with this statement, I know it is up to me to decide,
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but
frankly
speaking I have
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got
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some
reasons for my choose.

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days,
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teaching
plays
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very
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important
role in all aspects of life, whether for
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children
, young
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people
or
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old
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people
. There are
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many
values of teaching
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children
at school,
firstly
, it
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makes
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children
learn better than
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teaching
at home,
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so
this can be facilitating the teacher's
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teaching
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methods
of learning the courses.
Also
, if the students faced
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dificultes
in learning any subject, they can take a
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help
from their colleges, they
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can share their thoughts and
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ideas
together and can be
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benifits
from each other.

In contrast
with
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teaching
at home, there are
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some
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important
points we should consider and take into account, one of them is at home
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students
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may not have anyone to
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help
them in
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useing
the schools'
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website and
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they will suffer more in
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using the
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electronical
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methods
that helping in
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intering
the online classroom, as the teacher suffer too.
Moreover
, during the
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examinations learners will feel
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worried about their exam and the problem that will affect and
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make
them to
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loose
their marks.

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Before
I conclude I should say that,
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teaching
at
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at home is not a
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good
way in
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teaching
, and I
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prefere
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teaching
at school,
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because
I
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think
this way of
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methods
can
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help
the students to
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get
the information easier than at home,
also
the teachers can
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use
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many
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methods
of
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teaching
,
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but
not
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only
one way.
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Finaly
, Teachers
also
can catch their student's attentions by using
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this
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methods
of
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teaching
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contrloe
their classroom in easy way.
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IELTS essay IELTS Academic Samples IELTS Academic Samplesg

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
294 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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