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It is thought by some that it is better to live in a city while others believe that life is better in the countryside discuss both views and give your own opinion.

It is thought by some that it is better to live in a city while others believe that life is better in the countryside 0q01
It is sometimes argued that city is a good place to live while countryside is more safer for people than urban cities. I agree with the given approach and in this essay both sides of the topic will be clarified. On the one hand it is easy to find well satisfied job in cities. Major cities offer greater greater employment possibilities and higher standard of living because this town is developed it is comfortable to find a good lifestyle in these urban cities. For example there is only farming in countryside but now fewer people need traditional activities. In addition there is high salarid jobs in urban cities. On the other hand the countyside lifestyle is cheaper than city lifestyle. The cost of living is cheap in rural areas because people of landscapes do not needto buy something from market they can find from their farming or asking to their neighbours. To conclude it is good to live in urban cities however in my opinion countryside is more safer and intetesting with traditional activities such as farming.
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place to
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while countryside is
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approach and in this essay both sides of the topic will
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. On the one hand it is easy to find well satisfied job in
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cities
. Major
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cities
offer
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greater greater
employment possibilities and higher standard of living
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because
this town
is developed
it is comfortable to find a
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good
lifestyle in these
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urban
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cities
.
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farming in countryside
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fewer
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need traditional activities. In
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addition
there is high
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salarid
jobs in
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lifestyle is cheaper than city lifestyle. The cost of living is
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in rural areas
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of landscapes do not
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needto
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something from market they can find from their farming or
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asking to
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To conclude
it is
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to
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in
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urban
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cities
however
in my opinion countryside is
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more safer
and
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intetesting
with traditional activities such as farming.
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IELTS essay It is thought by some that it is better to live in a city while others believe that life is better in the countryside

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
177 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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