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It is thinking that saving money is better than spending it. How far do you agree

It is thinking that saving money is better than spending it. How far do you agree G3kkL

In this age of the complex economy, how to use money effectively is a complicated problem. Some people support the view that it is better to save money than to spend it. But in my way of thinking, spending money and saving money are both advisable Firstly, it is good to have some saving money in unexpected or unfortunate circumstances. In short, people who had their own savings may help them with the stressful situation or having financial problem. To my mind, i believe that saving money in terms of insurance is a careful preparation in order to arising incident in the future. Saving money is also a way to invest because the investors will get interest for saved money. For example, some retired family may have the interest to fulfill their daily needs. On the other hand, money is a tool, a tool you can use to buy everything you want, to enjoy your life. I definitely think that spending money is another way for you to reward yourself after hard working days Finally, you must strike the balance between saving and spending, conservative with your money, while at the same time spending enough to enjoy it without going too crazy. You should also not just save without spending some for yourself, it's bad for both you and your money. To conclude, though saving is an essential preparation for a human life but spending money also has its own benefits

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spending
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money
 and You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpreserving
saving
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money
 are both advisable

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good
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some
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saving
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money
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people
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savings
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help
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saving
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money
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arising
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money
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because
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get
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. For example
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money
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use
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buy
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think
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spending
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money
 is another way for you to reward yourself after This expression is normally spelled as one or with hyphen.hard-workinghardworking
hard working
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Finally
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must
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saving
 and You use this word too often, consider replacing it withusewasteconsumegiveinvestcontribute
spending
, conservative with your You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsalarywagewealthpaybillcash
money
, while at the same time You use this word too often, consider replacing it withusewasteconsumegiveinvestcontribute
spending
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:abundance
enough
 to enjoy it without going too crazy. You should also
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just
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spending
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some
 for yourself, it's This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :evil
bad
 for both you and your money.

To conclude
, though You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpreserving
saving
 is an essential preparation for a human life This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withusewasteconsumegiveinvestcontribute
spending
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsalarywagewealthpaybillcash
money
also
 has its This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :possess
own
 benefits