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describe a minir accident that you had in the past

describe a minir accident that you had in the past 5konD
This topic reminds me of the day when I was riding a bicycle on a small street inside my house block around five years ago and got involved in an accident. I was so engrossed riding my bicycle that I could not notice what was happening around me! Suddenly a car entered the apartment block compound, but I did not notice it. There was a head-on collision with the car and my bicycle, and it was a very unfortunate event that took place on that day. I lost control and fell abruptly. Luckily, it was a minor accident as the driver of the car had been able to stop the car in due time. I did not get seriously wounded, but there were some minor injuries that I could not avoid. Apart from physical injury, I was mentally shocked. I blamed myself for the accident as I should have been more careful. Using loud horns inside the apartment compound is prohibited, and so the car driver could not use it. All I can remember is that I saw a speeding car when I was riding my cycle and I tried to stop but could not avoid the collision with the car. I suffered a few minor injuries on my feet, elbow and hands. I took my bicycle, felt very sad about the whole event and apologised to the driver, who, by the way, was a nice man. He also apologised to me and offered to take me to a doctor. But I went home and my mom took me to a doctor. It took around a week for me to recover from the injuries. The doctor whom I saw prescribed a few medicines and bed rest so that the wounds heal quickly. It was a pathetic event for me, and the accident was entirely my fault. The physical injury was less severe than my mental state. But my mom spent some quality time with me for a couple of days as she took leave from her office. My dad was also worried and asked me to be more careful while riding a bicycle.
This topic reminds me of the day when I was
riding
a
bicycle
on a
small
street inside my
house
block around five years ago and
got
involved in an accident.

I was
so
engrossed
riding
my
bicycle
that I could not notice what was happening around me!
Suddenly
a
car
entered the apartment block compound,
but
I did not notice it. There was a head-on collision with the
car
and my
bicycle
, and it was a
very
unfortunate
event
that
took
place on that day.

I lost control and fell
abruptly
. Luckily, it was a minor accident as the driver of the
car
had been able to
stop
the
car
in due time. I did not
get
seriously
wounded,
but
there were
some
minor
injuries
that I could not avoid. Apart from physical
injury
, I was mentally shocked. I blamed myself for the accident as I should have been more careful. Using loud horns inside the apartment compound
is prohibited
, and
so
the
car
driver could not
use
it. All I can remember is that I
saw
a speeding
car
when I was
riding
my cycle and I tried to
stop
but
could not avoid the collision with the car.

I suffered a few minor
injuries
on my feet, elbow and hands. I
took
my
bicycle
, felt
very
sad about the whole
event
and
apologised
to the driver, who, by the way, was a nice
man
. He
also
apologised
to me and offered to take me to a doctor.
But
I went home and my mom
took
me to a doctor.

It
took
around a week for me to recover from the
injuries
. The doctor whom I
saw
prescribed a few medicines and bed rest
so
that the wounds heal
quickly
.

It was a pathetic
event
for me, and the accident was
entirely
my fault. The physical
injury
was less severe than my mental state.
But
my mom spent
some
quality time with me for a couple of days as she
took
leave
from her office. My dad was
also
worried and asked me to be more careful while
riding
a
bicycle
.
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IELTS essay describe a minir accident that you had in the past

Essay
  American English
6 paragraphs
353 words
5.5
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