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plans to have a surprise party for one of my family members

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A wedding anniversary is always a very meaningful and special day. I want to give my parents the best on that day. So I plan to celebrate the 25th wedding anniversary for whom I love so much. About 2 days after my parents' anniversary, my brother and I keep a secret to choose gifts for my mom and dad, maybe a couple of items like shoes, clothes. . . After that, we buy decorations like balloons, candles, flowers, print some pictures of our parents together. . . As time goes on, my parents get busier and busier so they gradually forget special anniversaries. So, on their wedding anniversary, when my parents go to work, my brother and I secretly decorate the bedroom with colorful balloons, hang pictures, stick meaningful words on the wall, next we go to the kitchen to prepare the food they like, plug a flowerpot to increase the romance. Then we design a beautiful cake and order it at a bakery near our house Before they return home we perfectly arrange the good food and special gift we bought. We hope they will be surprised and happy when they see this thoughtful preparation. My family will enjoy every moment together and love the food we cook and our gifts. This will be an extremely wonderful and memorable day that will make my parents closer and love each other for a long time.

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anniversary
 is always a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 meaningful and special day. I want to give my You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfathermother
parents
 the best on that day. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
So
 I plan to celebrate the 25th wedding You use this word too often, consider replacing it withceremonyholidaycommemorationfestivaljubilee
anniversary
 for whom I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :admireadore
love
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so
 much. About 2 days after my parents' You use this word too often, consider replacing it withceremonyholidaycommemorationfestivaljubilee
anniversary
, my brother and I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :retain
keep
 a secret to choose gifts for my mom and dad, maybe a couple of items like shoes, clothes. Don't put a space before the full stop.
.
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 After that, we This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchase
buy
 decorations like balloons, candles, flowers, print This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 pictures of our You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfathermother
parents
 together. Don't put a space before the full stop.
.
Don't put a space before the full stop.
.
 As time goes on, my You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfathermother
parents
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
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so
 they gradually
 forget special You use this word too often, consider replacing it withceremonyholidaycommemorationfestivaljubilee
anniversaries
. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
So
, on their wedding You use this word too often, consider replacing it withceremonyholidaycommemorationfestivaljubilee
anniversary
, when my You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfathermother
parents
 go to work, my brother and I secretly
 decorate the bedroom with colorful balloons, hang pictures, stick meaningful words on the wall, next
 we go to the kitchen to prepare the food they like, plug a flowerpot to increase the romance. Then we design a This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :gorgeousstunning
beautiful
 cake and order it at a bakery near our This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residence
house
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Before
 they return home we perfectly
 arrange the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 food and special gift we This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchased
bought
. We hope they will be surprised
 and happy when they This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
see
 this thoughtful preparation. My family will enjoy every moment together and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :admireadore
love
 the food we cook and our gifts. This will be an extremely
 wonderful and memorable day that will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 my You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfathermother
parents
 closer and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :admireadore
love
 each other for a long time. 