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CONSUMPTION OF FAST FOOD BY AUSTRALIAN TEENAGERS

CONSUMPTION OF FAST FOOD BY AUSTRALIAN TEENAGERS N3gad

The provided line graph depicts a comparison between three categories of junk food consumption eaten by Australian teenagers over 25 years from 1975 to 2000. Overall, the consumption of fish and chips declined over the provided period, whereas the amount of pizza and hamburgers had an opposite trend. In 1975, the amount of fish and chips peaked at 100 times per year, while the proportion of hamburgers and pizza at the same time were consumed approximately 5 times a year. However, apart from fluctuation from 1980 to 1985 before standing at roughly 95 times, the consumption of fish and chips has plummeted over the 25 years and was just under 40 in 2000. An opposite picture is that the ratio of teenagers ate the other two types of fast foods was higher. The consumption of pizza increased insignificantly until it surpassed the fish and chips in 1990. Then, it reached a plateau from 1995 to 2000. The exponential increase was noticeable in the amount of hamburgers consumption from 1975 to 1985, predominating that of fish and chips during that period. It finished at the same rate as fish and chips began and stayed static with a consumption of 100 times per year.

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