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It is the job of governments and companies to deal with the huge environmental problems which we face. Individuals on their own can do little or nothing’. What is your opinion about this statement v.2

It is the job of governments and companies to deal with the huge environmental problems which we face. Individuals on their own can do little or nothing’. What is your opinion about this statement v. 2
It is a common argument that all the environmental concerns are the responsibility of either the state or the related firms and not of the citizens. However, I am of a strong viewpoint that an individual can contribute a lot to safeguard the biodiversity of the planet and the absolute burden is not on the government or other agencies. Admittedly, it is obvious that government or local bodies cannot be omnipresent to counter the environmental issues, so it becomes the sheer duty of the citizens to become vigilant enough to support the authorities and making them aware of any ongoing mischief spoiling the flora or fauna in surrounding. For illustration in case of illegal mining or unauthorised cutting of forest trees or hunting of extinct animals, it becomes necessary to be eyes and ears, thus reporting of such crimes against nature by residents, is of utmost importance to save the earth. In addition to the above, each of us must take a vow to plant at least one sapling in every rainy season to make the earth greener as the government has limited resources and we must not wait for someone else to do the job, which we owe to our plane. In India one man devoted, twenty eight years of his life repaying mother nature by planting millions of trees, ultimately creating a forest spread in hundred of acres. This is the example of one man, one must imagine how great difference can seven billion people can make. To conclude, I would say that every person counts and one should make a little effort, when it comes to our environment and it is not the sole liability of nation or companies to take care of ecology and we must not wait for them to come to correct the mistake we all have done so far.
It is a common argument that all the environmental concerns are the responsibility of either the state or the related firms and not of the citizens.
However
, I am of a strong viewpoint that an individual can contribute a lot to safeguard the biodiversity of the planet and the absolute burden is not on the
government
or other agencies.

Admittedly
, it is obvious that
government
or local bodies cannot be omnipresent to counter the environmental issues,
so
it becomes the sheer duty of the citizens to become vigilant
enough
to support the authorities and making them aware of any ongoing mischief spoiling the flora or fauna in surrounding. For illustration in case of illegal mining or
unauthorised
cutting of forest trees or hunting of extinct animals, it becomes necessary to be eyes and ears,
thus
reporting of such crimes against nature by residents, is of utmost importance to save the earth.

In addition
to the above, each of us
must
take a vow to plant at least one sapling in every rainy season to
make
the earth greener as the
government
has limited
resources and
we
must
not wait for someone else to do the job, which we owe to our
plane
. In India one
man
devoted,
twenty eight
years of his life repaying mother nature by planting millions of trees,
ultimately
creating a forest spread in
hundred
of acres. This is the example of one
man
, one
must
imagine how great difference can seven billion
people
can
make
.

To conclude
, I would say that every person counts and one should
make
a
little
effort, when it
comes
to our environment and it is not the sole liability of nation or
companies
to take care of
ecology and
we
must
not wait for them to
come
to correct the mistake we all have done
so
far.
6Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
5Mistakes
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IELTS essay It is the job of governments and companies to deal with the huge environmental problems which we face. Individuals on their own can do little or nothing’. What is your opinion about this statement v. 2

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
306 words
6
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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