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It Is Suggested That Everyone Wants To Have A Car, A Television And A Fridge

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In morden era and development of technology car, TV as well as fridge are very basic needs to all people for thier lives. But use of them it is totally depends on them becasue every aspect has a two side. Firstly, I am taliking about positive side like about car, So many developing coutries has no good Transpotation for their citizens. so they are more using private transpotation. other benefits like it is safe, convient way of journey or ride. Even Car price is cheaper than then last decade. Instance like Tata compnies was developed car in minimum budget so avarage people will buy and Manage their frequent time. However, Tesla companies also launced the power charging car in India. So it can not cause the effect of the Envioremnt and save the natural resource. Discuss about Televison, In competative market peoples are always busy with thier time. They are watching tv and remove the stress. Most important they engged with current affaiers. Recently lot's of Relality shows, People will get the opprchunity to prove the skills and accelate their passions. At last, Mankind are using refrigator personally as professionaly. Example of Cold storage, During this time People can store the every item and Earning. Alougth it useful for daily household items. Other side of negetive impact, Sometimes people are doing travelling without reason so it is totally waste their time, Used natural resource and create the unecessary traffices on roards. It directly affect to the human life. Others point like Regular use of fridge, It develop the internal gas like carborn monoxide, so it is very serious problem for Health like a cancer. Third equpiment is Tv. Childreans are continuesly watching tv at free time. They never play outside. So it happen the lack of communication. Due this reason it direct affect to the vision and retina. Many times they try to perfrom Stunt without proper knowlage or guidence. it will be dangourios accidents. In Conclusion, Every coin has two side. Development is a good for society but How to use, it is totaly depended on the people. I strongly belive people sould know their all layer of life, Always keep in mind, it is useful or harmful for our lives. Even Goverment should take a action and stop to use of technology and stop the disaster.
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morden
era and development of technology
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car
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as fridge are
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basic needs to all
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people
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thier
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.
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depends on them
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becasue
every aspect has a two side.

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taliking
about
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positive
side like about
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car
,
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developing
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good
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Transpotation
for their citizens.
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so
they are more using private
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transpotation
.
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other
benefits like it is safe,
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convient
way of journey or ride. Even
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Car
price is cheaper than then last decade. Instance like Tata
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compnies
was developed
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car
in minimum budget
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so
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avarage
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people
will
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buy
and Manage their frequent
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time
.
However
, Tesla
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companies
also
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launced
the power charging
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car
in India.
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So
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Envioremnt
and save the natural resource.
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Discuss about Televison
, In
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competative
market
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peoples
are always busy with
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thier
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time
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tv
and remove the
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stress
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affaiers
. Recently
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lot's
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Relality
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shows
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get
the
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opprchunity
to prove the
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skills
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accelate
their passions. At last, Mankind are using
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refrigator
personally
as
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professionaly
. Example of
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storage, During this
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time
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People
can store the every item and Earning.
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Alougth
it useful for daily household items.

Other side of
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negetive
impact,
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people
are
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doing travelling
without reason
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waste their
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unecessary
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affect
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use
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develop
the internal gas like
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carborn
monoxide,
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serious problem for Health like a cancer. Third
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equpiment
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Tv
.
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Childreans
are
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continuesly
watching
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tv
at free
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time
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it
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affect to the vision and retina.
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perfrom
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knowlage
or
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guidence
.
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dangourios
accidents.

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, Every coin has two side. Development is a
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good
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How to
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use
, it is
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totaly
depended on the
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people
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strongly
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belive
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people
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sould
know their all layer of life, Always
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keep
in mind, it is useful or harmful for our
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lives
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Goverment
should take
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action and
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stop
to
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use
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stop
the disaster.
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IELTS essay It Is Suggested That Everyone Wants To Have A Car, A Television And A Fridge

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
388 words
5.5
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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