It is well understood that people who travel a lot will have most adaptable and open mind because while during their journey to another country they will be exposed to a plethora of unfamiliar situations which he could have not experienced in his home town. So I would wish to go in hand with the statement.
Admittedly, when a person is travelling to another country, independence is replaced with the dependency that is because in a foreign nation it will be must for us to communicate with people from different part of the globe, it encourages us to understand them and about their culture and tradition. While during our journey we will come across various types unfamiliar circumstances and it will help us to learn how to cope-up with the situations. Thus travel encourages us to understand and love others.
On the other hand, it is well known that people who don't travel a lot will be narrow minded and it will be impossible for them to tackle with a complex situation in their life, it is mainly due to the non-dependent lifestyle that make them feel more secure. For instance, think about the tribal people they think that there is no world outside their habitat and it is quite different for them to tolerate or love a person outside their group, they consider us as an alien.
To recapitulate, people who travel a lot will have more logical thinking and broad minded it will help them to adopt with people from different culture and tradition and to solve any situations easily.
It is well understood that
people
who
travel
a lot will have most adaptable and open mind
because
while during their journey to another country they will
be exposed
to a plethora of unfamiliar
situations
which he could have not experienced in his home town.
So
I would wish to go in hand with the statement.
Admittedly
, when a person is travelling to another country, independence
is replaced
with the dependency
that is
because
in a foreign nation it will be
must
for us to communicate with
people
from
different
part of the globe, it encourages us to understand them and about their culture and tradition. While during our journey we will
come
across various types unfamiliar circumstances and it will
help
us to learn how to cope-up with the
situations
.
Thus
travel
encourages us to understand and
love
others.
On the other hand
, it is well known that
people
who don't
travel
a lot will be
narrow minded
and it will be impossible for them to tackle with a complex
situation
in their life, it is
mainly
due to the non-dependent lifestyle that
make
them feel more secure.
For instance
,
think
about the tribal
people
they
think
that there is no world outside their habitat and it is quite
different
for them to tolerate or
love
a person outside their group, they consider us as an alien.
To recapitulate,
people
who
travel
a lot will have more logical thinking and
broad minded
it will
help
them to adopt with
people
from
different
culture and tradition and to solve any
situations
easily
.
6Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
14Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2Mistakes