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It is sometimes argued that tourists from overseas should be charged more than local residents to visit important sites and monuments. I completely disagree with this idea. The argument in favour of higher prices for foreign tourists would be that cultural or historical

It is sometimes argued that tourists from overseas should be charged more than local residents to visit important sites and monuments. I completely disagree with this idea. The argument in favour of higher prices for foreign tourists would be that cultural or historical LbVWR
It is sometimes argued that tourists from overseas should be charged more than local residents to visit important sites and monuments. I completely disagree with this idea. The argument in favour of higher prices for foreign tourists would be that cultural or historical attractions often depend on state subsidies to keep them going, which means that the resident population already pays money to these sites through the tax system. However, I believe this to be a very shortsighted view. Foreign tourists contribute to the economy of the host country with the money they spend on a wide range of goods and services, including food, souvenirs, accommodation and travel. The governments and inhabitants of every country should be happy to subsidise important tourist sites and encourage people from the rest of the world to visit them. If travellers realised that they would have to pay more to visit historical and cultural attractions in a particular nation, they would perhaps decide not to go to that country on holiday. To take the UK as an example, the tourism industry and many related jobs rely on visitors coming to the country to see places like Windsor Castle or Saint Paul’s Cathedral. These two sites charge the same price regardless of nationality, and this helps to promote the nation’s cultural heritage. If overseas tourists stopped coming due to higher prices, there would be a risk of insufficient funding for the maintenance of these important buildings. In conclusion, I believe that every effort should be made to attract tourists from overseas, and it would be counterproductive to make them pay more than local residents
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sometimes
argued that
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tourists
from overseas should
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more than local

residents to visit
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important
sites and monuments. I completely disagree with this
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idea
.

The argument in
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favour
of higher prices for foreign
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tourists
would be that cultural or historical

attractions
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often
depend on state subsidies to
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keep
them going, which means that the resident

population already pays money to these sites through the tax system.
However
, I believe this

to be a
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very
shortsighted view. Foreign
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tourists
contribute to the economy of the host country

with the money they spend on a wide range of
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goods
and services, including food, souvenirs,

accommodation and travel. The
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governments
and inhabitants of every country should be

happy to
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subsidise
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important
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tourist
sites and encourage
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people
from the rest of the world to

visit them.

If
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travellers
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realised
that they would
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have to
pay more to visit historical and cultural attractions

in a particular nation, they would perhaps decide not to go to that country on holiday. To take

the UK as an example, the tourism industry and
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many
related jobs rely on visitors coming to

the country to
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see
places like Windsor Castle or Saint Paul’s Cathedral. These two sites

charge the same price regardless of nationality, and this
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helps
to promote the nation’s cultural

heritage. If overseas
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tourists
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stopped
coming due to higher prices, there would be a
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risk
of

insufficient funding for the maintenance of these
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important
buildings.

In conclusion
, I believe that every effort should
be made
to attract
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tourists
from overseas, and

it would be counterproductive to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
them pay more than local residents
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IELTS essay It is sometimes argued that tourists from overseas should be charged more than local residents to visit important sites and monuments. I completely disagree with this idea. The argument in favour of higher prices for foreign tourists would be that cultural or historical

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
268 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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