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It is said that, "Not everything that is learned is contained in books. 'Compare and contrast knowledge gained from experience with knowledge gained from books. In your opinion, which source is more important? Why? Give reasons for your answer and v.3

It is said that, "Not everything that is learned is contained in books. 'Compare and contrast knowledge gained from experience with knowledge gained from books. In your opinion, which source is more important? Why? 3
Nowadays, it is very common to travel or work during and after the educational period. Mostly people prefer to do such activities when they got 6 months or 12 months of free time. Although travel doesn't limit for rich people, the most common person is also travelling also travel as per their economic strength. There are always positive and negative sides of everything both views are discussed as follows. One of the biggest advantages is by travelling or working, people have become more active mentally and physically which ultimately helpful for them. During the work, people have lots of experience, whether it is good or bad, but they learn a lot, which will help them in future corporate sectors. On the other hand, while travelling; it is the most interesting way of learning by observation and the exposure of new cultures and people. For instance, one of my cousin brothers used to travel a lot because during the journey he has faced lots of difficulties and challenge self-limitations which makes him extend his own limitations, so ultimately he has developed or learned about himself after completion of the trip, so for him each journey reveals his new interpersonal skills. On the negative side, some people have become habitual for shorter trips just for fun or change of mind, although they don’t have enough financial strength and due to that, it becomes one of the root causes of problems in a family. Similarly, another adverse effect is, some students have worked after school and as they got a regular income so they do not prefer to complete their education and get the degree certificate. In conclusion, I firmly believe that young people should be encouraged to break their boundaries also they should aware of the importance of educational certificate in order to get better future opportunities.
Nowadays, it is
very
common to
travel
or work during and after the educational period.
Mostly
people
prefer to do such activities when they
got
6 months or 12 months of free time. Although
travel
doesn't limit for rich
people
, the most common person is
also
travelling
also
travel
as per their economic strength. There are always
positive
and
negative
sides of everything both views
are discussed
as follows.

One of the biggest advantages is by travelling or working,
people
have become more active mentally and
physically
which
ultimately
helpful for them. During the work,
people
have
lots
of experience, whether it is
good
or
bad
,
but
they learn a
lot
, which will
help
them in future corporate sectors.
On the other hand
, while travelling; it is the most interesting way of learning by observation and the exposure of new cultures and
people
.

For instance
, one of my cousin brothers
used
to
travel
a
lot
because
during the journey he has faced
lots
of difficulties and challenge self-limitations which
makes
him extend his
own
limitations,
so
ultimately
he has developed or learned about himself after completion of the trip,
so
for him each journey reveals his new interpersonal
skills
.

On the
negative
side,
some
people
have become habitual for shorter trips
just
for fun or
change
of mind, although they don’t have
enough
financial strength and due to that, it becomes one of the root causes of problems in a family.
Similarly
, another adverse effect is,
some
students have worked after school and as they
got
a regular income
so
they do not prefer to complete their education and
get
the degree certificate.

In conclusion
, I
firmly
believe that young
people
should
be encouraged
to break their boundaries
also
they
should aware
of the importance of educational certificate in order to
get
better future opportunities.
7Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7Mistakes

IELTS essay It is said that, "Not everything that is learned is contained in books. 'Compare and contrast knowledge gained from experience with knowledge gained from books. In your opinion, which source is more important? Why? 3

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
305 words
7
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