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It is said that new parents should attend parenting courses to make sure to know how to raise a kid successfully. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the opinion?

It is said that new parents should attend parenting courses to make sure to know how to raise a kid successfully. with the opinion? eAxGK
It is irrefutable that one of the most important responsibilities of parents is taking good care of their children which is difficult with young parents and it should ensure the growth of their offspring by joining in parenting course. When they participate in this course they will learn how to do the best thing to their children. From where I stand, I do agree with aforementioned statement and some compelling aspects will be analyzed in this essay. To begin with, the courses will help parents to educate their kids to the successful way. Most of parents want their kid to become successful person in the future, so children’s behaviors and knowledge are based on how their parenting styles which they use to teach. In fact, when parents take part in parenting courses, they will be taught by steps to steps and they can learn a lot of methods and solution which can be suitable with the different situation which your children have. In parallel, the courses can help parents to know how to use suitable parenting styles when your children have some serious consequences such as depression, autism. The right way to teach them is the first step to lead to the success of a kid. Additionally, parents can learn more solutions and experience from the other parents who also join in the same course. Moreover, parents sometimes need to hear more advices from the different parents. No matter how age children is, maybe 18-year-old, or only 2-year-old, the other parents can help to solve any problems with they have been met before with their children and it also the same problem with yours. If parents listen directly from the experienced person, they will remember for long time than learning from the book. In conclusion, parents should join in parenting course to learn more or improve their parenting styles. This courses bring a lot of advantage experiences for parents, after learning, parents will find the suitable ways to raise their kids to be a good, successful person in the future.
It is irrefutable that one of the most
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important
responsibilities of
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parents
is taking
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good
care of their
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children
which is difficult with young
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parents
and it should ensure the growth of their offspring by joining in
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parenting
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course
.
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When
they participate in this
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course
they will
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learn
how to do the best thing to their
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children
. From where I stand, I do
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agree
with aforementioned statement and
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some
compelling aspects will
be analyzed
in this essay.

To
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begin
with, the
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courses
will
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help
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parents
to educate their kids to the successful way. Most of
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parents
want their kid to become successful person in the future,
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so
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children’s
behaviors and knowledge
are based
on how their
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parenting
styles which they
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use to
teach. In fact, when
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parents
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take part
in
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parenting
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courses
, they will
be taught
by steps to
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steps and
they can
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learn
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a lot of
methods and solution which can be suitable with the
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different
situation which your
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children
have. In parallel, the
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courses
can
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help
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parents
to know how to
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use
suitable
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parenting
styles when your
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children
have
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some
serious consequences such as depression, autism. The right way to teach them is the
first
step to lead to the success of a kid.

Additionally
,
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parents
can
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learn
more solutions and experience from the other
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parents
who
also
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join
in the same
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course
.
Moreover
,
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parents
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sometimes
need to hear more advices from the
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different
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parents
. No matter how age
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children
is, maybe 18-year-
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old
, or
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only
2-year-
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, the other
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parents
can
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help
to solve any problems with they have
been met
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before
with their
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children
and it
also
the same problem with yours. If
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parents
listen
directly
from the experienced person, they will remember for long time than learning from the book.

In conclusion
,
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parents
should
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join
in
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parenting
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course
to
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learn
more or
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improve
their
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parenting
styles.
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This
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courses
bring
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a lot of
advantage experiences for
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parents
, after learning,
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parents
will find the suitable ways to raise their kids to be a
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good
, successful person in the future.
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IELTS essay It is said that new parents should attend parenting courses to make sure to know how to raise a kid successfully. with the opinion?

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
340 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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