Advertisement plays part and parcel role in human life from where people know latest things. Nowadays, especially advertise targeting children and their adverts that frequently promote toys on TV and they are considered vulnerable target by companies. I agree with the statement yet some conservative swing in the opposite direction. I will elaborate my opinion in the upcoming paragraphs.
To embark upon, there are numerous of reasons why toys should forbid on the television. First and foremost, children are obsessed with toys in young age and whenever they see these kinds of commercial of the toys of their superhero for instance Doreman, Batman and Barbie then they pester their parents to buy those things as well as this can upset the budget of their families. However, children, undertaken a certain age, lack ability to make the wise judgement as they do not know what they really want.
Moreover, commercials are also responsible for many behaviour problems and lifestyle issues of today’s children. For example, playing violent electronic games promoted by advertising firms all day make some children bad-tempered. All these problems would pose a threat to children’s health as well as growth.
On the other hand, childhood is the only age to play with toys. They play a vital role in the physical and mental development of kids. Furthermore, youngsters become more creative by playing with toys and learn sharing things with others and with the help of broadcast folks know about what toys are available in the market.
In the epilogue, I think that though children become demanding to see the adverts of toys, but a ban on the ad is not a reasonable solution. It is the responsibility of the parents to teach their young ones not to be influenced by commercials.
Advertisement plays part and parcel role in human life from where
people
know
latest
things. Nowadays,
especially
advertise targeting
children
and their adverts that
frequently
promote
toys
on
TV and
they
are considered
vulnerable target by
companies
. I
agree
with the statement
yet
some
conservative swing in the opposite direction. I will elaborate my opinion in the upcoming paragraphs.
To embark upon, there are numerous of reasons why
toys
should forbid on the television.
First
and foremost,
children
are obsessed
with
toys
in young age and whenever they
see
these kinds of commercial of the
toys
of their superhero
for instance
Doreman
, Batman and Barbie then they pester their parents to
buy
those things
as well
as this can upset the budget of their families.
However
,
children
, undertaken a certain age, lack ability to
make
the wise judgement as they do not know what they
really
want.
Moreover
, commercials are
also
responsible for
many
behaviour
problems and lifestyle issues of
today
’s
children
.
For example
, playing violent electronic games promoted by advertising firms all day
make
some
children
bad
-tempered. All these problems would pose a threat to
children’s
health
as well
as growth.
On the other hand
, childhood is the
only
age to play with
toys
. They play a vital role in the physical and mental development of kids.
Furthermore
, youngsters become more creative by playing with
toys
and learn sharing things with others and with the
help
of broadcast folks know about what
toys
are available in the market.
In the epilogue, I
think
that though
children
become demanding to
see
the adverts of
toys
,
but
a ban on the ad is not a reasonable solution. It is the responsibility of the parents to teach their young ones not to
be influenced
by commercials.
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