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It is proposed that smoking should be banned in every way how are you agree or disagree

It is proposed that smoking should be banned in every way how are you agree or disagree jbVVa
It is truly believe that smoking is injurious to health. it contains nicotine which only note cause harm to the active smokers but also dangerous for passive smokers. whereas, It is consirded that ligh up must be banned in every where. I agree with this statement up to some extent. Further, for both views are to be anaylized in the following paragraph. On the one hand there are certain reason which are considered in everywhere smoking must be banned. most importantly, smoking is harmful for our health which can cause asthma, cancer and effect respiration system. also, smoking Rises the the blood pressure which cause Heart Attack and kidney problem. Secondly, if a person is smoking on public place which makes adverse effect on children and women health Due to it, many people distract from them. A survey which was conducted by Europe University in 2015 year revealed that it is scientifically proven that 60% over the individuals believe that smoking must be prohibited in everywhereOn the other hand it is also reckoned that smoking not be banned in everywhere for some reason. first and the foremost is, smoking not be banned in everywhere fo some reasons. some masses smoke to get relief from tension and worries. Tojustify, individuals are busy in their hectic schedule they hava a lot of work on daily basis because of hard job. Secondly, many people have a habit of smoking after a meal for the purpose of cleaning their balls. To conclude, after having multiple both aspects it is quite evident that the smoking must be banned at public places but However l. it can be allowed at private places such as Oka bar and smoking Cafe
It is
truly
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believe
that
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smoking
is injurious to health.
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it
contains nicotine which
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only
note cause harm to the active smokers
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but
also
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dangerous
for passive smokers.
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whereas
, It is
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consirded
that
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ligh
up
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must
be
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banned
in
Did you mean "everywhere"?
every where
. I
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agree
with this statement up to
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some
extent.
Further
, for both views are to be
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anaylized
in the following paragraph. On the one hand there are certain reason which
are considered
in everywhere
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smoking
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
must
be
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banned
.
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most
importantly
,
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smoking
is harmful for our health which can cause asthma, cancer and effect respiration system.
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also
,
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smoking
Rises
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the the
blood pressure which cause Heart Attack and kidney problem.
Secondly
, if a person is
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smoking
on public place which
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
makes
adverse effect on children and women health Due to it,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
distract from them. A survey which
was conducted
by Europe University in 2015 year revealed that it is
scientifically
proven that 60% over the individuals believe that
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smoking
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
must
be prohibited
in
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everywhereOn
the other hand it is
also
reckoned that
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smoking
not be
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banned
in everywhere for
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some
reason.
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first
and the foremost is,
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smoking
not be
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banned
in everywhere
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fo
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some
reasons.
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some
masses smoke to
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get
relief from tension and worries.
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Tojustify
, individuals are busy in their hectic schedule they
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hava
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a lot of
work on daily basis
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because
of
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hard
job.
Secondly
,
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many
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
have a habit of
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smoking
after a meal for the purpose of cleaning their balls.
To conclude
, after having multiple both aspects it is quite evident that the
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smoking
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
must
be
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
banned
at public places
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but
However
l. it can be
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allowed
at private places such as
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Oka
bar and
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smoking
'Cafe' is an imported foreign expression, which originally has a diacritic. Consider using "café"
Cafe
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IELTS essay It is proposed that smoking should be banned in every way how are you agree or disagree

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
282 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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