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It is possible to live a full life without internet access. Give your opinion.

It is possible to live a full life without internet access. Give your opinion. J0Y5e
Internet has become internal part of our life. After the evolution of internet-based technology, it has been growing at unprecedented rate. This may raise a question: Do we enjoy life if this technology is not available? To begin with, proliferated demand and dependency on network for education, earning wages and entertainment is increased exponentially. By this I mean that it is difficult to find any area where contribution of web is not much. Furthermore, such technology helps in enrichment and enlargement of boundaries of any area with only few clicks. one can get plethora of data in fraction of seconds. For example, anyone may pay their utility bill, order any materialistic thing online or may book any service at their comfort zone. However, there is a big question about quality of data and facts available. People need to use it wisely to explore and extract right information. This dilemma has impacted quality of human life in a most terrible way. Social media is case in point. Youngsters or children of ‘vulnerable psyche’ may end up their exploration in wrong direction which may accelerate stress, anxiety, and depression. Without net, people would involve in more interactive and life exercises. I concede, ancestors had a great quality of life although it was quite challenging; to do any research, or gather data, or to communicate with anyone. However, in today’s time, life without internet would be difficult to imagine. It is undeniable that internet is like lifeblood of humankind. In conclusion, from aforementioned points, it is aptly clear that Web is a service but usage of it depends on one’s choice.
Internet has become internal part of our
life
. After the evolution of internet-based technology, it has been growing at unprecedented rate. This may raise a question: Do we enjoy
life
if this technology is not available?

To
begin
with, proliferated demand and dependency on network for education, earning wages and entertainment
is increased
exponentially
. By this I mean that it is difficult to find any area where contribution of web is not much.
Furthermore
, such technology
helps
in enrichment and enlargement of boundaries of any area with
only
few clicks.
one
can
get
plethora of data in fraction of seconds.
For example
, anyone may pay their utility bill, order any materialistic thing online or may book any service at their comfort zone.

However
, there is a
big
question about quality of data and facts available.
People
need to
use
it
wisely
to explore and extract right information. This dilemma has impacted quality of human
life
in a most terrible way. Social media is case in point. Youngsters or children of ‘vulnerable psyche’ may
end
up their exploration in
wrong
direction which may accelerate
stress
, anxiety, and depression. Without net,
people
would involve in more interactive and
life
exercises.

I concede, ancestors had a great quality of
life
although it was quite challenging; to do any research, or gather data, or to communicate with anyone.
However
, in
today
’s time,
life
without internet would be difficult to imagine. It is undeniable that internet is like lifeblood of humankind.

In conclusion
, from aforementioned points, it is
aptly
clear
that Web is a service
but
usage of it depends on one’s choice.
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IELTS essay It is possible to live a full life without internet access. Give your opinion.

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268 words
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