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The graphs below depict the development of a village of Wells-on-the-Water during a period of 25 years in the UK. As can be seen from the maps, the village changed considerably over the time period with the replacement of the farmland for other facilities such as roads and shops. The village was modernised with significant changes in many areas and developed into a residential area. The trees were cut down to make way for shops and houses. In addition, another road called Queens Drive road was opened to the East of Wood Drive road, connecting Wood Drive with the Northern area with New shops and post office constructed along Queens Drive. Furthermore, the old factory and Mansion House was converted into luxury flats and Care House respectively. Especially, the farmhouse was replaced by a park while the post office remained in use. As a bridge was constructed to connect people from both riverbanks, more houses were built near the river.

The graphs below depict the development of a village of Wells-on-the-Water during a period of 25 years in the UK.

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