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it is often to said government spend too much money on environment others say other problem of country . what is your opinion

it is often to said government spend too much money on environment others say other problem of country. what is your opinion b3yNg
Nowadays, people have many views whether are consumed vast amounts of money on projects to save the environment or other issues by the government. I think although expending too much money should solve other problems in the country is necessary, also the spending the vast amount of money ought to prevent habitat loss for animals On the one hand, the state of the country ought to contribute money to another issue of the land, which means they prevent poverty and should increase the living standards of society. For example, if the government consumes money to develop new job centers, they can also prevent starvation in the motherland. Therefore, everyone has an opportunity to get educations without any tuition fee, and all these processes provide the future of offspring. On the other hand, the state of the country should contribute a certain amount of money to various types of projects to prevent habitat loss or other environmental issues because all problems are related to the commercial purposes of the government. Furthermore, logging and deforestation principally increase because the authorities build new industrial factories, and these new manufactural constructions mainly influence the wildlife. For instance, according to the researches, the construction of a new factory is caused by cutting down 1, 000 trees in the woodland during one week of administration. Consequently, the authorities make an effort to create modern plans for saving the environment because all nature problems should impact our generations in the future. In conclusion, I believe even though crowds have various opinions about these projects, the authorities keep the balance between the environment and society, and these projects provide an unstressful life for crowds.
Nowadays,
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people
have
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many
views whether
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vast amounts of
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money
on
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projects
to save the environment or
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other
issues by the
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government
. I
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think
although expending too much
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money
should solve
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other
problems in the country is necessary,
also
the spending the vast amount of
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money
ought to
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prevent
habitat loss for
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animals


On the one hand, the state of the country ought to contribute
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money
to another issue of the land, which means they
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prevent
poverty and should increase the living standards of society.
For example
, if the
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government
consumes
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money
to develop
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new
job centers, they can
also
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prevent
starvation in the motherland.
Therefore
, everyone has an opportunity to
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get
educations without any tuition fee, and all these processes provide the future of offspring.

On the
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other
hand, the state of the country should contribute a certain amount of
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money
to various types of
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projects
to
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prevent
habitat loss or
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other
environmental issues
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because
all problems
are related
to the commercial purposes of the
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government
.
Furthermore
, logging and deforestation
principally
increase
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because
the authorities build
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new
industrial factories, and these
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new
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manufactural
constructions
mainly
influence the wildlife.
For instance
, according to the researches, the construction of a
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new
factory
is caused
by cutting down 1, 000 trees in the woodland during one week of administration.
Consequently
, the authorities
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make
an effort to create modern plans for saving the environment
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because
all nature problems should impact our generations in the future.

In conclusion
, I believe
even though
crowds have various opinions about these
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projects
, the authorities
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keep
the balance between the environment and society, and these
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projects
provide an
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unstressful
life for crowds.
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IELTS essay it is often to said government spend too much money on environment others say other problem of country. what is your opinion

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