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it is often seen that qualified teachers are unwilling to go rural areas and teach in village schools

it is often seen that qualified teachers are unwilling to go rural areas and teach in village schools bdRW
Writing task 2: (29/3/2021) It is apparent that qualified teachers are uninterested to go to the countryside and teach in village schools. In this essay, I will discuss the consequences and suggest solutions. Firstly, I will explore the financial problems faced by teachers while working in schools. Secondly, I will discuss the lack of facilities in village schools and rural areas. It is true that teachers who are teaching in rural areas are paid less. As a result of teachers are unwilling to teach in village-based schools, many knowledgeable teachers are migrating to cities and towns for better pay. One solution to this problem could be local governments funding teachers with good pay-scale. As a result of this teachers could feed their families, pay for rent and basic needs. Another cause for teachers not interested to teach in rural-based schools is a lack of facilities such as accommodation, infrastructure in schools, transportation and other facilities. Consequently, many teachers are willing to work in big schools which provide all these facilities. One suggested solution could be the management of the school build new classrooms, improve infrastructure, library, give subsidized accommodation and transportation to the faculty. This would encourage the tutors to teach well to the children. As a result of this poor people who are studying in these schools can acquire knowledge and excel in their life. This would have a beneficial impact on their families and society. In conclusion, we can see that the well-qualified lecturers need a good pay-scale, to support themselves financially, and the necessary resources to teach well to the children.
Writing task 2: (29/3/2021)

It is apparent that qualified
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teachers
are uninterested
to go to the countryside and
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teach
in village
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schools
. In this essay, I will discuss the consequences and suggest solutions.
Firstly
, I will explore the financial problems faced by
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teachers
while working in
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schools
.
Secondly
, I will discuss the lack of facilities in village
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schools
and rural areas.

It is true that
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teachers
who are teaching in rural areas
are paid
less.
As a result
of
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teachers
are unwilling to
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teach
in village-based
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schools
,
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many
knowledgeable
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teachers
are migrating to cities and towns for better pay. One solution to this problem could be local
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governments
funding
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teachers
with
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good
pay-scale.
As a result
of
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this
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teachers
could feed their families, pay for rent and basic needs.

Another cause for
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teachers
not interested to
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teach
in rural-based
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schools
is a lack of facilities such as accommodation, infrastructure in
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schools
, transportation and other facilities.
Consequently
,
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many
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teachers
are willing to work in
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big
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schools
which provide all these facilities. One suggested solution could be the management of the
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school
build new classrooms,
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
improve
infrastructure, library, give subsidized accommodation and transportation to the faculty. This would encourage the tutors to
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teach
well to the children.
As a result
of this poor
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people
who are studying in these
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schools
can acquire knowledge and excel in their life. This would have a beneficial impact on their families and society.

In conclusion
, we can
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see
that the well-qualified lecturers need a
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
pay-scale, to support themselves
financially
, and the necessary resources to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
teach
well to the children.
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IELTS essay it is often seen that qualified teachers are unwilling to go rural areas and teach in village schools

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
264 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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