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Many people claim that increasing the price can solve environment

Many people claim that increasing the price can solve environment 93qr

Oil and petrol are considered to be the main energy source of transportations such as car and motorcycle. With a large number of these productions are being used nowadays, the environment is become polluted. Many people claim that increasing the price can solve this problem whereas some other ones think that will not be effective. From my perspective, I will discuss the rationale behind these viewpoints before showing why I insist the former and providing other solutions. In conclusion, increasing price of petrol is not the most efficient way to save the environment. The combination of others aforementioned solutions can help to solve this problem.

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 showing why I insist the former and providing other solutions.

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IELTS essay Many people claim that increasing the price can solve environment

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American English

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