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It is often said that it is necessary to educate a new language to familiar himself/herself with new country. How far do you agree with above?

It is often said that it is necessary to educate a new language to familiar himself/herself with new country. How far do you agree with above? O6wlM
Nowadays people opt to travel to so many countries for various purpose and each country has its own language. Someone who wants to visit any country, it is important to learn their Native language in order for better understanding. This essay will discuss that now studying language is a necessity for someone. Learning something new is always a great experience and gaining knowledge of a language gives himself/herself that experience. Because of understanding of language one can feel that they belong to that place. Especially, while making friends language helps a lot which makes their life easier. Certainly, one cannot get proficient in language with basic knowledge available in their own country but practicing the language with locals is going to be beneficiary. One can get more exposure and practical usage of it. Once a person gets familiar to language it gets effortless to adjust and adopt. It becomes simpler to connect with people and get to know about their culture. Simultaneously, one can easily find a job and if someone is travelling for education purpose it helps in study a lot too. For example, students who are applying for Germany for higher studies tend to learn German language minimum up to A2 level before arriving to Germany. These efforts help them to live much sorted life. However, learning new language can be a difficult task and it can vary person to person. Some may find it hard to understand and struggle with it for a bit. But as per the saying goes ‘Practice makes man perfect’, one can overcome these difficulties. To sum up with, learning new language is enriching experience and I completely agree that it’s a thing one must do to get comfortable in a new country.
Nowadays
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people
opt to travel to
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so
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many
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countries
for various purpose and each
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country
has its
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own
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language
. Someone who wants to visit any
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country
, it is
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important
to learn their Native
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language
in order for better understanding. This essay will discuss that
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now
studying
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language
is a necessity for someone.

Learning something
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new
is always a great experience and gaining knowledge of a
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language
gives himself/herself that experience.
“Because” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
Because
of understanding of
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language
one can feel that they belong to that place.
Especially
, while making friends
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language
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helps
a lot which
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makes
their life easier.
Certainly
, one cannot
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get
proficient in
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language
with basic knowledge available in their
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own
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country
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but
practicing the
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language
with locals is going to be beneficiary. One can
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get
more exposure and practical usage of it.

Once a person
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gets
familiar to
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language
it
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gets
effortless to adjust and adopt. It becomes simpler to connect with
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people
and
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get
to know about their culture.
Simultaneously
, one can
easily
find a job and if someone is travelling for education purpose it
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helps
in study a lot too.
For example
, students who are applying for Germany for higher studies tend to learn German
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language
minimum up to A2 level
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before
arriving to Germany. These efforts
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help
them to
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live
much sorted life.

However
, learning
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new
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language
can be a difficult task and it can vary person to person.
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Some
may find it
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hard
to understand and struggle with it for a bit.
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But
as per the saying goes ‘Practice
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makes
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man
perfect’, one can overcome these difficulties.

To sum up with, learning
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new
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language
is enriching experience and I completely
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agree
that it’s a thing one
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must
do to
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get
comfortable in a
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new
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country
.
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IELTS essay It is often said that it is necessary to educate a new language to familiar himself/herself with new country. How far do you agree with above?

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
290 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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