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It is often argued that disappeared of plant and animals

It is often argued that disappeared of plant and animals DqQ8E
It is widely believed that surrounding issues of this present time is loss of flora and fauna rather than other crucial environmental issues. I will discuss both views and Personally, I agree with latter view because there are other more serious issues which includes health problem and pollution. To embark upon, In this modern era many forest has been cut down. Moreover individuals are cutting down forest area for their benefits. Therefore many species has been disappeared. For instance, many birds and animals are keeping in zoos and conservation area because of deforestation. In addition natural calamities is also one of the reason for disappearing plant and animals. Every year in many country different calamities occured such as earthquake, flood as a result many species died and disappeared. On the other hand, Air pollution is one of the serious issue which is increasing day by day. Due to numerous transportation, wastage and garbage. This is because more people and more vehicles. As a result it causes global warming. This has been confirmed by a study in USA. Every year the temperature of earth is inclined day by day. Another reason is emerging new diseases. Nowdays we can see such as COVID and its varient are inclined day by day. As a result which causing morbidity and mortality around the world. According to WHO majority of people have been died from COVID than other disease. so it a serious problem of this era. In conclusion, loss of flaura and fauna are also environment problem. However there are many other important surrounding issues like pollution and diseases therefore we need to be more careful.
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widely
believed that surrounding
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issues
of this present time is loss of flora and fauna
rather
than
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other
crucial environmental
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issues
. I will discuss both views and
Personally
, I
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agree
with latter view
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because
there are
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other
more serious
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issues
which includes health problem and pollution.

To embark upon, In this modern era
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many forest
has been
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cut
down.
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Moreover
individuals are cutting down forest area for their benefits.
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Therefore
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many
species has
been disappeared
.
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,
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many
birds and animals are keeping in zoos and conservation area
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because
of deforestation. In
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addition
natural calamities is
also
one of the reason for disappearing plant and animals. Every year in
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many
country
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different
calamities
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occured
such as earthquake, flood
as a result
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many
species
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died
and disappeared.

On the
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other
hand, Air pollution is one of the serious
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issue
which is increasing day by day. Due to numerous transportation, wastage and garbage. This is
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because
more
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people
and more vehicles.
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As
a result it causes global warming. This has
been confirmed
by a study
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in USA
. Every year the temperature of earth
is inclined
day by day. Another reason is emerging new diseases.
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Nowdays
we can
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see
such as
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COVID
and its
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varient
are inclined
day by day.
As a result
which causing morbidity and mortality around the world. According to
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WHO majority
of
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people
have been
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died
from
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COVID
than
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other
disease.
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so
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it
a serious problem of this era.

In conclusion
, loss of
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flaura
and fauna are
also
environment problem.
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However
there are
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many
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other
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important
surrounding
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issues
like pollution and diseases
therefore
we need to be more careful.
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IELTS essay It is often argued that disappeared of plant and animals

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272 words
5.5
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