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It is not the responsibility of billionaires to address social problems. They have created their own money by working hard and they should be able to spend it in anyway that they want to. If it wasn’t for billionaires, we wouldn’t have a lot of the things which we all enjoy today, such as X-boxes, iPhones and Tesla cars. We should be thanking them, not criticising them.To what extent do you agree with the above statement?You should write at least 250 words.

It is not the responsibility of billionaires to address social problems. They have created their own money by working hard and they should be able to spend it in anyway that they want to. If it wasn’t for billionaires, we wouldn’t have a lot of the things which we all enjoy today, such as X-boxes, iPhones and Tesla cars. We should be thanking them, not criticising them. 2anQo

There's many opinions say that It is not the responsibility of billionaires to address social problems. They have created their own money by working hard and they should be able to spend it in anyway that they want to. As for me, I completely agree with this opinion. On the one hand, I can understand the thought of those who criticising billionaires for not address social problems. To most of them, billionaires are greedy, only care about their own profit, throwing money out of the window wastefully for their own desires

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 they should be able to spend it Did you mean "in any way"?in any way
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