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Describe a time of day you like

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by the time hearing this question, I thought of the early morning at once. However, That doesn't mean I don't like the rest of the day. This time or the others are also crucial issues to balance a whole day. As my routine, I usually get up at 5: 30 a. m without any annoying because I literally love the feeling that this moment affords me every day. Apparently, this time with the fresh air and the quiet space is an appropriate time to practice yoga and meditation, or go to a park, and so on. Actually, I often spend around 10 minutes working out at home. This truly makes me feel energetic for a long day. Afterward, I usually enjoy this period with a cup of coffee as well. Before leaving home to reach the hospital, I’m supposed to change into scrub a kind of my work clothes and have a delicious breakfast prepared by so quickly various means. Furthermore, the reason why I'm really attached to this time is its range of differences compared to the other parts of the day. The early morning is the only time when you can admire the sunrise. Especially, Soft light, cool air, along with the dewdrops remaining on the leaves seem to create a very harmonious scene and is a medicine to make your mood more relaxed than ever. Besides, it’s the ideal time to think about important issues and plan for the whole day. From time to time, when I was running out of ideas to solve a problem somehow a solution popped up in my mind in the early morning during enjoying coffee. In conclusion, I love early morning because of the difference as well as the benefits it brings to my life. Being an early riser makes my day seem longer and I get to do a lot of things and think of interesting ideas for my life. It also shows that I cherish every moment of my day.
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or the others are
also
crucial issues to balance a whole day.

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up at 5: 30 a. m without any annoying
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love
the feeling that this moment affords me every day.
Apparently
, this
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time
with the fresh air and the quiet space is an appropriate
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time
to practice yoga and meditation, or go to a park, and
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so
on. Actually, I
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often
spend around 10 minutes working out at home. This
truly
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makes
me feel energetic for a long day. Afterward, I
usually
enjoy this period with a cup of coffee
as well
.
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leaving home to reach the hospital, I’m supposed to
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into scrub a kind of my work clothes and have a delicious breakfast prepared by
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so
quickly
various means.

Furthermore
, the reason why I'm
really
attached to this
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is its range of differences compared to the other parts of the day. The
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early
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is the
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when you can admire the sunrise.
Especially
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leaves
seem to create a
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harmonious scene and is a medicine to
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make
your mood more relaxed than ever.
Besides
, it’s the ideal
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about
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issues and plan for the whole day. From
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, when I was running out of
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ideas
to solve a problem somehow a solution popped up in my mind in the
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early
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during enjoying coffee.

In conclusion
, I
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love
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early
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because
of the difference
as well
as the benefits it brings to my life. Being an
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riser
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makes
my day seem longer and I
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that I cherish every moment of my day.
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IELTS essay Describe a time of day you like

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
331 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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