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It is not necessary internet have to access to live full life.give your opinion.

It is not necessary internet have to access to live full life. give your opinion. qL7eG

Some people opine that technology to access in our full life is not prominent. according my opinion, it is true because it's cause of unemployment and unhealthy for youth and children. Firstly, increment of technology and high quality of internet come in business which is reason of replacement of old worker old employees hard to get job in other companies. to explain it, chance of poverty increased and difficult to servive in contemporary world without job. Further more, most of children's Enjoying to play online games rather than phsycial games like hockey, football, cricket and another more games. to elaborate it, kids attract. By Facebook, Twitter which is not good for them. on other hand, it's loss of education also. In conclusion, internet is not important to live full life because it's destroy phsycial abilities and jobs of older employees who don't know about computerised world.

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