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it is more important for students to understand ideas and concept than knowing the facts

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Studies are the most integral part of a student life, for example, development of a childs brain and is associated with how well he knows the subject matter and its ellaboration etc. , according to me I partially agree with the stated lines that students must know the basic principle and ideas. As well as, learning the facts are also very neccessary and important. The first thing which i would like to consider, is that by knowing right concept child will gain ualities like better explanation, better judgement etc. as a result, he or she will score good marks in the examination. On the other hand, facts will make them aware of their surrounding, in terms they will improve on their decision making abilities. The next thing I would comment that, by having a better understanding of the subjects help them feeling themselves confident in the future, as they will be the future of this world. For example, they will feel so much comfortable while facing interviews, also for gaining promotions. In addition to this, knowing the facts will help them guiding for being the better leader of their respective fields. To recapitulate, in my opinion I would say that for overall growth of a dicipline they must be aware with the facts as well as concepts and ideas.
Studies are the most integral part of a student life,
for example
, development of a
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childs
brain and
is associated
with how well he knows the
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subject matter
and its
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ellaboration
etc.
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,
according to me I
partially
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agree
with the stated lines that students
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
must
know the basic principle and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
ideas
.
As well
as, learning the facts are
also
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very
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neccessary
and
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important
.

The
first
thing which
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i
would like to consider, is that by knowing right concept child will gain
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ualities
like
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better
explanation,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
better
judgement etc.
as a result
, he or she will score
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
marks in the examination.
On the other hand
, facts will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
them aware of their surrounding, in terms they will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
improve
on their
This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
decision making
abilities.

The
next
thing I would comment that, by having a
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better
understanding of the subjects
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
them
The verb 'of' is used with an infinitive: "to feel" or "feel".
feeling
themselves confident in the future, as they will be the future of this world.
For example
, they will feel
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
much comfortable while facing interviews,
also
for gaining promotions.
In addition
to this, knowing the facts will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
them
The verb 'the' is used with an infinitive: "to guide" or "guide".
guiding
for being the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
better
leader of their respective fields.

To recapitulate, in my opinion I would say that for
overall
growth of a
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dicipline
they
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
must
be aware with the facts
as well
as concepts and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
ideas
.
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IELTS essay it is more important for students to understand ideas and concept than knowing the facts

Essay
  American English
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219 words
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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