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Difficult to survive on earth so need to search new planet

Difficult to survive on earth so need to search new planet 5ABRe
it is irrefutable that, it seems to be difficult to survive on earth in the coming years. Few masses believe that money should be spent in the search for a new planet to survive. this essay intends to delve into viewpoints along with my perspective. Firstly, few homosapiens disagree on this point. They believe in spending lots of money to find air, water, and also the possibilities of surviving on another planet. However, the earth is a good place to live because they think that the earth is a "God's Place". Another point of view is that having everything here your family, business, house, etcetera so no need to move to another planet to survive the rest of our life.
it
is irrefutable that, it seems to be difficult to survive on earth in the coming years. Few masses believe that money should
be spent
in the search for a new planet to survive.
this
essay intends to delve into viewpoints along with my perspective.
Firstly
, few
homosapiens
disagree on this point. They believe in spending lots of money to find air, water, and
also
the possibilities of surviving on another planet.
However
, the earth is a
good
place to
live
because
they
think
that the earth is a
"
God's Place
"
. Another point of view is that having everything here your family, business,
house
, etcetera
so
no need to
move
to another planet to survive the rest of our life.
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IELTS essay Difficult to survive on earth so need to search new planet

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
120 words
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