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Grades encourage students to study. Do you agree or disagree

Grades encourage students to study. gDAKD
Education is considered to be essential for everyone ranging from the youth to the elderly. When educating grades play an important role to motivate students. Due to good marks students have an opportunity to comprehend something deeply as well as evaluate themselves comparing to their peers. To begin with, students can be inspired by several aspects one of which is grades. In the field of education teachers evaluate students with grades according to their actions, knowledge and etc. Students who get good grades want to study furthy and crack new peaks of the course intentionally. On the other hand, those who get poor marks become desperate as a result of which prepare for the new theme unintentionally finally ending up with nothing. As a student I can remember my coursemate who repeatedly got bad grades which led her to hate her majoring. Now she is too away form the profession she learnt The second reason why I agree that grades help students to evaluate their knowledge compared with their group mates. Having been known that they are superior to the others which gives the sense of euphoria, they try to do their best in order not to lose their current imaginary best place. However those who got bad marks detest everyone surrounding the area because of the feeling of shyness and passimistic character which undoubtedly affect their not only professional area but also future. I know a pupil in our school who is the target of teasing, avoiding and school pranking. When I searched for the reason I realized that she was a victim of teacher's putting her bad marks and ignorance. To sum up, I agree with the idea that grades totally inspire students to study and fly higher in their future career
Education
is considered
to be essential for everyone
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ranging
from the youth to the elderly.
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When
educating
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grades
play an
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important
role to motivate
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students
. Due to
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good
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marks
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students
have an opportunity to comprehend something
deeply
as well
as evaluate themselves comparing to their peers.

To
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begin
with,
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students
can
be inspired
by several aspects one of which is
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grades
. In the field of education teachers evaluate
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students
with
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grades
according to their actions, knowledge
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and etc
.
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Students
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who
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get
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good
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grades
want to study
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furthy
and crack new peaks of the course
intentionally
.
On the other hand
, those
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who
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get
poor
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marks
become desperate
as a result
of which prepare for the new theme
unintentionally
finally
ending up with nothing.
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As
a
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student
I can remember my
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coursemate
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who
repeatedly
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got
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bad
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grades
which led her to hate her majoring.
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Now
she is too away form the profession she
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learnt


The second reason why I
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agree
that
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grades
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help
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students
to evaluate their knowledge compared with their group mates. Having
been known
that they are superior to the others which gives the sense of euphoria, they try to do their best in order not to lose their
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current
imaginary best place.
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However
those
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who
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got
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bad
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marks
detest everyone surrounding the area
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because
of the feeling of shyness and
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passimistic
character which
undoubtedly
affect their not
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only
professional area
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but
also
future. I know a pupil in our school
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who
is the target of teasing, avoiding and school pranking. When I searched for the reason I realized that she was a victim of teacher's putting her
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bad
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marks
and ignorance.

To sum up, I
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agree
with the
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idea
that
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grades
totally
inspire
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students
to study and
fly
higher in their future career
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IELTS essay Grades encourage students to study.

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
293 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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