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It is more important for a building to serve its purposes than to look beautiful. Architects do not need to worry about whether it is a real work of art. Do you agree or disagree? v.1

It is more important for a building to serve its purposes than to look beautiful. Architects do not need to worry about whether it is a real work of art. v. 1
It seems that skyscrapers are growing in favour of many cities around the world. Accordingly, architects find it controversial whether they should prioritize their form or function. This essay will explain why I completely agree that buildings should be constructed with reasonable purposes. Supporters of well-designed eyesores hold that they can put the name of its city or country in the world’s map. An explanation is that they are capable of marking that city’s development in economy and architecture. As a result, there have been many cities came to the public eye thanks to their famous high-rise building. One of which, for instance, is the Big Ben of London. In addition, it is said these eye-catching icons also attribute to the local economic benefit since they draw visitors’ attraction. Antarctica, they demonstrate, which was once distant to many people’s knowledge, now hums with tourists worldwide. This is due to their glamorous dormitory igloos, despite the fact that no one can live there as everything will melt when summer comes. On the other hand, why should one be built is the concern of many architects. They opine that it will be a waste of money if one infrastructure is set up with no purpose. This is because one cannot be formed without consuming tonnes of reinforced concrete, brick, and timber. Another suggested reason is the fact an unnecessary structure would do tremendous harm to the nature and local people. To be more specific, there will be a need to cut down thousands of trees and move hundreds of households to make place for constructing area. It is advisable we stop slaughtering these buildings whilst there are many other worthy sectors to spend on, such as education and health issues. To recap, there are reasons why people prefer artistic featured buildings. Each of them is considered an icon of their city and civic development. However, if I were to choose, I absolutely advocate those are built with decent purposes to ensure no pennies are wasted meaninglessly.
It seems that skyscrapers are growing in
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favour
of
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many
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cities
around the world.
Accordingly
, architects find it controversial whether they should prioritize their form or function. This essay will
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explain
why I completely
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agree
that
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buildings
should
be constructed
with reasonable purposes.

Supporters of well-designed eyesores hold that they can put the name of its city or country in the world’s map. An explanation is that they are capable of marking that city’s development in economy and architecture.
As a result
, there have been
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
cities
came to the public eye thanks to their
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
famous
high-rise
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
building
. One of which,
for instance
, is the
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
Big
Ben of London.
In addition
, it
is said
these eye-catching icons
also
attribute to the local economic benefit since they draw visitors’ attraction. Antarctica, they demonstrate, which was once distant to
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
’s knowledge,
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
now
hums with tourists worldwide. This is due to their glamorous dormitory igloos, despite the fact that no one can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
live
there as everything will melt when summer
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
comes
.

On the other hand
, why should one
be built
is the concern of
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
architects. They opine that it will be a waste of money if one infrastructure
is set
up with no purpose. This is
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
one cannot
be formed
without consuming tonnes of reinforced concrete, brick, and timber. Another suggested reason is the fact an unnecessary structure would do tremendous harm to the nature and local
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
. To be more specific, there will be a need to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
cut
down thousands of trees and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
move
hundreds of households to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
place for constructing area. It is advisable we
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
stop
slaughtering these
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
buildings
whilst there are
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
other worthy sectors to spend on, such as education and health issues.

To recap, there are reasons why
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
prefer artistic featured
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
buildings
. Each of them
is considered
an icon of their city and civic development.
However
, if I were to choose, I
absolutely
advocate those
are built
with decent purposes to ensure no pennies
are wasted
meaninglessly
.
7.5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7.5Mistakes

IELTS essay It is more important for a building to serve its purposes than to look beautiful. Architects do not need to worry about whether it is a real work of art. v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
334 words
7.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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