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It is increasing number of people using credit card which seems likely to replace the coins and notes . It is positive or negative development .

It is increasing number of people using credit card which seems likely to replace the coins and notes. It is positive or negative development. g52K3
Due to introduction of plastic money has changed the life as it vanished old currency. However, some people argued that that it is fruitful in fast - moving era while others deny it. I completely agree with the first notion of the statement that using of credit card has great influence. This essay will discuss positive impacts in subsequent paragraph before conclusion. There are manifold benefit of using bank card in today's era that it help to store backeup of financial statement. Sometimes many individuals buy unsusal products without taking care of money. Therefore, it assist to analysing the real money in bank. Apart from that it is big hinderence among cyber criminals as it required secrey pincode to withdraw money from account. Thus, it shows error by dialing wron code which is good for card holders as they save money their money from theft. Getting deeper into illustration that it is very useful in emergency cases. To explain, if there any mishappening occur while driving on road and the condition is very serious then it is become easy to get admit in the hospital by paying instantly. As a result, it saves the life of person. In addition to this there no need for any calculations for notes which help person to save time as it payed by digitally. For instance, a survey was conducted in United Kingdom which reveal that it is most developed country because the citizens usually pay money with the help of credit card. Consequently, new way of paying money has made the life easier. To sum up, advancements that take place in person's life have great role in solveing the issue in this way credit card also give benefit to human being and technology will get more shopisticated in future.
Due to introduction of plastic
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changed
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life
as it vanished
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old
currency.
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,
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some
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people
argued
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it is fruitful in
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fast
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moving era while others deny it. I completely
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agree
with the
first
notion of the statement that using of credit
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card
has great influence. This essay will discuss
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positive
impacts in subsequent paragraph
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before
conclusion. There are manifold benefit of using bank
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card
in
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today
's era that it
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help
to store
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backeup
of financial statement.
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Sometimes
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many
individuals
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buy
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unsusal
products without taking care of
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money
.
Therefore
, it
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assist
to
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analysing
the real
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money
in bank. Apart from that it is
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big
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hinderence
among cyber criminals as it required
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secrey
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pincode
to withdraw
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money
from account.
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, it
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shows
error by dialing
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wron
code which is
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good
for
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card
holders as they save
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money
their
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money
from theft. Getting deeper into illustration that it is
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very
useful in emergency cases. To
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explain
, if
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there any
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mishappening
occur while driving on road and the condition is
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very
serious then it
is become
easy to
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get
admit in the hospital by paying
instantly
.
As a result
, it saves the
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life
of person.
In addition
to this there no need for any calculations for notes which
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help
person to save time as it
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payed
by
digitally
.
For instance
, a survey
was conducted
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in United Kingdom
which reveal that it is most
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developed country
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because
the citizens
usually
pay
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money
with the
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help
of credit
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card
.
Consequently
, new way of paying
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money
has made the
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life
easier. To sum up, advancements that take place in person's
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life
have great role in
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solveing
the issue in this way credit
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card
also
give benefit to human being and technology will
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get
more
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shopisticated
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in future
.
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IELTS essay It is increasing number of people using credit card which seems likely to replace the coins and notes. It is positive or negative development.

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
296 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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