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advantage and disadvantage of wearing uniform?

advantage and disadvantage of wearing uniform? NWLx0
General uniform is related to our traditions, culture as well as our aspect. It is crucial and mandatory for all of us because It helped to gives us our identification moreover in enormous folks thinks, it is good impact for our society as well as social activities. However, other people believe it produce inequalities for our social structure. I think uniform have important or advantage as well as disadvantage, it was both characteristics carried. First of all, uniform is directly related to our culture or traditional thing. This is not only true, it is also related company rule, education factor etc. student and employers are wearing uniforms because they want to show there identification in front the world otherwise colossal people don't recognise that group. This is the advantage. Gradually i memories my own memory, when I was 15 years old that time I was studied great ten. one day when i was returning home, Criminal party started the protest against our government. That time I was troubled, that was one serendipity thing. I wearing uniform that is the main reason when police come here then he was rescue me. If that time I was not wearing the uniform, I am not front of yours. that means uniform is positive impact for our minds otherwise that policeman did rescue me. Secondly, every tradition and culture is crucial thing for each and every society. if you ruminate about the tradition or culture after few minutes, you found how much uniform is important our society. We think we preserve our tradition and our culture without the uniform. You are completely wrong. if you want to preserve your tradition you definitely affix your own uniform. that gives your identification that means uniform have many advantage. However another path uniform is disadvantages our society because it creates social conflict in our society, uniform make different level of society based on caste, income then it is directly influence our relation. that means uniform have also carried this advantage thing Finally, uniform it's important as well as worse things, it is depends your thinking, this is funny but this is true. most of the thing carry it positive as well as negative in pattern for our society. similarly Uniform also influence positive as well as negative in our society.
General
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to our
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traditions
,
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culture
as
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as our aspect. It is crucial and mandatory for all of us
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because
It
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helped
to
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gives
us our identification
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in enormous folks
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thinks
, it is
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good
impact for our
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society
as
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well
as social activities.
However
, other
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people
believe it produce inequalities for our social structure.

I
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think
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uniform
have
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important
or advantage as
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well
as disadvantage, it was both characteristics carried.

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First of all
,
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uniform
is
directly
related to our
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culture
or traditional thing. This is not
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true, it is
also
related
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company
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, education factor etc. student and employers are wearing
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uniforms
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because
they want to
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show
there identification in front the world
otherwise
colossal
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people
don't
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recognise
that group. This is the advantage.
Gradually
i memories my
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own
memory, when I was 15 years
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that time I
was studied
great ten.
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one
day when
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i
was returning home, Criminal party
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started
the protest against our
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government
. That time I
was troubled
, that was one serendipity thing.
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I wearing
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uniform
that is
the main reason when police
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come
here then he was rescue me. If that time I was not wearing the
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uniform
, I am not front of yours.
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that
means
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uniform
is
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positive
impact for our minds
otherwise
that policeman did rescue me.

Secondly
, every
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tradition
and
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culture
is crucial thing for each and every
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society
.
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if
you ruminate about the
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tradition
or
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culture
after few minutes, you found how much
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uniform
is
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important
our
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society
. We
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think
we preserve our
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tradition
and our
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culture
without the
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uniform
. You are completely
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wrong
.
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if
you want to preserve your
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tradition
you definitely affix your
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own
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uniform
.
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that
gives your identification that means
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uniform
have
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many advantage
.

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However
another path
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uniform
is disadvantages our
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society
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because
it creates social conflict in our
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society
,
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uniform
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make
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different
level of
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society
based on caste, income then it is
directly
influence our relation.
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that
means
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uniform
have
also
carried this advantage
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thing


Finally
,
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uniform
it's
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as
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as worse things, it is
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depends
your thinking, this is
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funny
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but
this is true.
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most
of the thing carry it
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positive
as
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well
as
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in pattern for our
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society
.
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similarly
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Uniform
also
influence
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in our
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IELTS essay advantage and disadvantage of wearing uniform?

Essay
  American English
6 paragraphs
383 words
5.5
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