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It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, for instance for sport or music, and others are not. However, it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician.Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, for instance for sport or music, and others are not. However, it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician. wQ8q
Nowadays human beings are showcasing a lot of different talents. While a section of people concur to the fact that humans are born talented for certain arts, others are in opinion that anyone can learn and become skilful. This essay will discuss why certain skills are believed to be acquired by birth but why it is not always the scenario. In my opinion, mankind can master any field by proper guidance. A number of people believe in the fact that we need to be born gifted to excel in fields like music or sport. People in these areas need to be more creative with their ideas so that they can be famous. Furthermore, the thoughts must be novel. For instance, only handful in the music industry like Mr. Micheal Jackson are popular even today for their exquisite work. It is a known fact that he did not take any training during his entire lifespan. Hence, it is evident that in creative fields people are born genius. In contrary, although a person do not have the knack in certain field, with some counsel he/she can be made an expert. If they are taught about the basics and also on how to implement the logic, then they can definitely prosper. For example, if a person is eager to become a bowler in Cricket, when he is coached in regard to different types of balls he can easily take wickets and win trophies for his country. Therefore, with certain interest and effort one can gain expertise in any field. To conclude, humanity posses lot of talent. This essay discussed on why certain fields need the knack but why they can also be dominated with good teaching. In my eyes, if a child has fascination towards a certain talent even though he does not posses the talent he can certainly become prosperous with guidance.
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talents
. While a section of
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people
concur to the fact that humans
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talented for
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certain
arts, others are in opinion that anyone can learn and become
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skilful
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certain
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skills
are believed
to
be acquired
by birth
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but
why it is not always the scenario. In my opinion, mankind can master any
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field
by proper guidance.

A number of
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people
believe in the fact that we need to
be born
gifted to excel in
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fields
like music or sport.
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People
in these areas need to be more creative with their
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ideas
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so
that they can be
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famous
.
Furthermore
, the thoughts
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must
be novel.
For instance
,
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only
handful in the music industry like Mr. Micheal Jackson are popular even
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today
for their exquisite work. It is a known fact that he did not take any training during his entire lifespan.
Hence
, it is evident that in creative
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fields
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people
are born
genius.

In contrary, although a person do not have the knack in
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certain
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field
, with
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some
counsel he/she can
be made
an expert. If they
are taught
about the basics and
also
on how to implement the logic, then they can definitely prosper.
For example
, if a person is eager to become a bowler in Cricket, when he
is coached
in regard to
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different
types of balls he can
easily
take wickets and win trophies for his country.
Therefore
, with
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certain
interest and effort one can gain expertise in any field.

To conclude
, humanity posses lot of
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talent
. This essay discussed on why
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certain
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fields
need the knack
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but
why they can
also
be dominated
with
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good
teaching. In my eyes, if a child has fascination towards a
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certain
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talent
even though
he does not posses the
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talent
he can
certainly
become prosperous with guidance.
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IELTS essay It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, for instance for sport or music, and others are not. However, it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician.

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310 words
6.5
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